[Gurb] Green Arrow

[iamgurb]

Continuation from http://forum.ragezone.com/f119/gurb-steel-907251/

Don't really like my outcome that much (effects around arrow didn't turn out as expected) but I'll post it here anyways for C&C.

Flash will be next, enjoy!

Album :

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Logo:

Wallpaper 1:

Wallpaper 2:

 

[drksage]

- both wallpapers text are too dark
- the "diagonal lines" in wallpaper 2 should be at both edges and not at the top
- wallpaper 1 should have two "diagonal lines" as well

the arrow looks good in the wallpaper. (8/10)
The one in the first image looks a tad bit more green, which makes it worse (7.2/10)

 

[iamgurb]

- both wallpapers text are too dark
- the "diagonal lines" in wallpaper 2 should be at both edges and not at the top
- wallpaper 1 should have two "diagonal lines" as well

the arrow looks good in the wallpaper. (8/10)
The one in the first image looks a tad bit more green, which makes it worse (7.2/10)

Its the same arrow but rotated on both wallpapers. One might look different because the orientation of the arrow shifts the bright green part to different sides, and the diagonal lines were meant to be that way since they are different wallpapers. I only wanted 2 diagonal lines on the first one
Thanks for your feedback!

 

[jur13n]

@ the effect around the arrow.
Shouldn't you add the effect to the innerhole too?
It looks a bit weird right now qq

 

[ChewBecca]

ah man, this would look sweet for

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logo using their R.

 

[drksage]

Its the same arrow but rotated on both wallpapers. One might look different because the orientation of the arrow shifts the bright green part to different sides, and the diagonal lines were meant to be that way since they are different wallpapers. I only wanted 2 diagonal lines on the first one
Thanks for your feedback!

hmm I guess its my screen then because the orientation of the arrow in the logo is the same in wallpaper 1, but the edges in wallpaper 1 have a yellow and white tone that looks better, compared to the logo with a full green tone.

 

[iamgurb]

@ the effect around the arrow.
Shouldn't you add the effect to the innerhole too?
It looks a bit weird right now qq

Good eye, will fix it when I can!

ah man, this would look sweet for

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logo using their R.

Too bad I don't know anything about that band/musician :huh:

 

[ChewBecca]

Good eye, will fix it when I can!

Too bad I don't know anything about that band/musician :huh:

Its my boyfriends band. I'm going to show this design to them, they may be interested in using it. They always give credit where it is due

 

[iamgurb]

Its my boyfriends band. I'm going to show this design to them, they may be interested in using it. They always give credit where it is due

Feel free, art is better when shared anyways!

 

[ChewBecca]

Feel free, art is better when shared anyways!

Well, when I say it I mean that style in their r. (From the remnant logo)

 

[iamgurb]

Well, when I say it I mean that style in their r. (From the remnant logo)

I know, I'm just saying the more people that see my gfx the better while also saying to feel free to take any ideas from the piece for theirs :

 

[Irahnik]

that hole is very bothersome