NubPro said:
Simply imagine the scene yourself!
Okay I'll try ^
To me I see nothing special here except random pictures of legos that seem like a total waste of time for me.
Pic 1 :
Very blurry, I get the car is supposed to be standing out, but its not. The lego character is standing out more then the car even though the character is blurry af. Also the light makes it even worse because it attracts attention to the background, which makes me want to see the background because I see a lego pointing a gun or w/e that is at another, and that seems more interesting then the front hood of a toy car.
Collage (Pic 1 : top left, Pic 2 : top right, Pic 3 : mid left, Pic 4 : Mid right, Pic 5: mid bottom left):
Pic 1 :
No idea whats going on here. I see people are fixing the inside of a train cart, but on top theres a guy pointing a gun(?) to another, and theres 3 people just watching the sunset(?) (even though the light source is from the left and I see them looking straight), and
to throw it all off, theres a giant collection of books getting ready to gank some engineers.
Pic 2:
Its the same picture but zoomed in 0.0..and the feet at the top look weird when you're trying to focus the middle of the picture.
Pic 3:
Theres a light source coming from the right end of the picture, okay thats starting to bring some flow, and then BOOM, theres a dot of light on the guys helmet where it should be darker since the rest of his body is in a shadow. Its like the light gods just came down and shone a ray of light on his helmet.
Pic 4:
Books(?)
Pic 5:
Pretty sure the shadow of you taking the picture covered it.
Not going to comment on the bottom two because its just the same thing.
This is my opinion, it could be harsh/brutal but I honestly think you should have either a) put more time in this or b) put no time in this. Good luck on your future endeavors with this form of photography.
tl;dr : Lighting is very poor, pictures make no sense, there is no clear sense of any story. Good luck in the future.