Blure's Signatures

[KraMer]

Agree with what creeps has been telling you for the most part, there's still lots of ground for you to cover and many years to come messing with photoshop until you can talk the way you do [hell, i still consider myself pretty noobish at times after doing this for more than half a decade]


you do have the potential to be a great designer as long as you remember to keep your head down, especially this one could have been SO MUCH BETTER with proper text, correct sharpening and some blurring, maybe changing the lightning a little and getting some dept. also scanlines going on top of the whole render? well, designers choise... [altho, the scanlines are awesome in this otherwise, might be what makes it stand out in my eyes so much]

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and then, the last one, it already has a lot more to it, depth and lighting and all, but your text really needs some work [some=A LOT]

 

[Rey]

Since that whole comment I got from Sparkler I tried to do something new, a completely new style, and since I don't know to use C4D's really nice, I tried something like this:

Its amazing .. so amazing

 

[Rey]

The lastest signature is awesome ! keep up the good work Blure !!

Its amazing .. so amazing

are you singing "Kanye West - Amazing" ? XD

 

[Rey]

are you singing "Kanye West - Amazing" ? XD

yep i am sometimes the lyrics just describes the situation that you're in

 

[Blure Shadow]

Well, I made another one ,dedicated to someone special anyway, I know the text is bad, I just don't know what to do with it.

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Made 4 other:

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[2009x2014]

wew the Joker one rulez, like it.

 

[Shadi Darkness]

Well, I made another one ,dedicated to someone special anyway, I know the text is bad, I just don't know what to do with it.

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Boobs :top:

 

[KraMer]

Well, I made another one ,dedicated to someone special anyway, I know the text is bad, I just don't know what to do with it.

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Made 4 other:

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these are all MUCH better than your previous work, however instead of quantity you should focus on quality for a while...

 

[NubPro]

this is cute!
Where can I find the render?

 

[Blure Shadow]

this is cute!
Where can I find the render?

I found it on google images under "Pikachu Render"
Here it is:

Spoiler

these are all MUCH better than your previous work, however instead of quantity you should focus on quality for a while...

After I learn a new style, I usually practice a lot, that's how I do it, so I can learn it better.

 

[Rey]

i LOVE your new joker one

 

[Blure Shadow]

Here I am, with 2 new signatures:

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[Rey]

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You're * :junglejane:

they are nice but you can do better , keep up <3

 

[Blure Shadow]

You're * :junglejane:

they are nice but you can do better , keep up <3

It's a quote from Scary Movie 4

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[Rey]

It's a quote from Scary Movie 4

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i know i know u shouldnt put "Unless you a zombie" ..... unless you a zombie :junglejane:

 

[Blure Shadow]

Bump. I'd like to request a critique for the last 2 sigs (Red demon and Zombie) from some advanced GFX artist.

 

[KraMer]

Bump. I'd like to request a critique for the last 2 sigs (Red demon and Zombie) from some advanced GFX artist.

Here I am, with 2 new signatures:

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pros

• Lighting
• colours
• pretty good contrast between sharp and blurry, although the renders could stand out bit more
• actually nice usage of c4d's compared to your previous works
• decent effects

cons

• lack of any kinds of borders (yes it's artist's choise, but would improve those signatures so much)
• upper one totally lacks dept, the bottom one has already some
• FOR GOD's SAKE, TRY SOME OTHER FONTS AND TEXTSTYLES!!
• textpositioning is horrible (Although I'm not the one with any business ranting on this one)

bottom line is: you are progressing but there's still tons of room to improve

 

[Blure Shadow]

pros

• Lighting
• colours
• pretty good contrast between sharp and blurry, although the renders could stand out bit more
• actually nice usage of c4d's compared to your previous works
• decent effects

cons

• lack of any kinds of borders (yes it's artist's choise, but would improve those signatures so much)
• upper one totally lacks dept, the bottom one has already some
• FOR GOD's SAKE, TRY SOME OTHER FONTS AND TEXTSTYLES!!
• textpositioning is horrible (Although I'm not the one with any business ranting on this one)

bottom line is: you are progressing but there's still tons of room to improve

The thing is that both of them have a small border, inner stroke, white, screen, 1px you can see it on a black bg, Also, I already use styles for the text, you can see it has a "glass-ish" style, on both sigs, and the text positioning, I don't know where to put it xD
Thanks for the comm, I'm waiting for others too

 

[KraMer]

The thing is that both of them have a small border, inner stroke, white, screen, 1px you can see it on a black bg, Also, I already use styles for the text, you can see it has a "glass-ish" style, on both sigs, and the text positioning, I don't know where to put it xD
Thanks for the comm, I'm waiting for others too

checked on black bg and those borders look nice!

about the texts.. i meant you should try some OTHER textstyles and fonts too, because so far every or atleast majority of your signatures use exact same style and exact same font.
In my opinion you should experiment with different fonts and different styles and make the the fonts really fit the signature, to look good and be easily readable

One thing ive been thinking of your texts all along is that you should really use drop shadow and very-very subtle and light glow to make your texts more readable.

 

[Creeps]

checked on black bg and those borders look nice!

about the texts.. i meant you should try some OTHER textstyles and fonts too, because so far every or atleast majority of your signatures use exact same style and exact same font.
In my opinion you should experiment with different fonts and different styles and make the the fonts really fit the signature, to look good and be easily readable

One thing ive been thinking of your texts all along is that you should really use drop shadow and very-very subtle and light glow to make your texts more readable.

I'll have to disagree with that one. Never use drop shadow in a typo, it'll ruin the whole signature depth