Looking for comments :3

[Severithe]

Been trying to learn a new style for a while and this is the result,
anyone can tell me how it looks from your perspective ?

 

[NubPro]

love it :3
it pretty outstanding, I saw some chinese words right?

 

[ecstazy]

looks great,and i like the text too

 

[Severithe]

uu, thanks
still learning ~<3

 

[Razer]

Not trying to be horrible or disrespectful, but the color choices are very bad; it just doesn't work imho.
Also, the edges and quality of everything looks a bit rough/naff.

Nice try, though.

 

[NubPro]

Not trying to be horrible or disrespectful, but the color choices are very bad; it just doesn't work imho.
Also, the edges and quality of everything looks a bit rough/naff.

Nice try, though.

I though that's part of the design