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    Visit my hompage Vi3tb0i2ty is offline
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    Sub Zero.


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    I would really appreciate the constructive criticism to help me improve.

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    Quote Originally Posted by Vi3tb0i2ty View Post
    I would really appreciate the constructive criticism to help me improve.

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    Seems kinda bland an unrealistic. And that smoke or blue fire or whatever, it's clearly just a brush, and you can also clearly see where you used the eraser. :|
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    Re: Sub Zero.

    I appreciate the constructive criticism. I will work on that.

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    Quote Originally Posted by Vi3tb0i2ty View Post
    I would really appreciate the constructive criticism to help me improve.

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    I thought the Black and White is just superb. It great to what it looks to me...

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    Good work!

    -Work on blending a bit more -- there is too much blue too.
    -The size coulda been better. ( A good size for this type of render would have been 450x275)
    -The text is extremely bland, and badly placed. Try placing the text somewhere around sub zero's right shoulder, and playing with different fonts/effects. (such as stroke, outer glow, etc.)
    -look for better backgrounds, atm it's pretty much just a few sub zeros.

    Feel free to update and post again, I'd be happy to give more comments!

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    ZiVeX Clan Leadeŕ Rey is offline
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    Re: Sub Zero.

    It's amazing! BUT..

    Try to blur the back of SubZero, specially the shining brush.
    I hate perfection, it means you cannot improve any further.

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    I think the whole perspective is wrong, maybe you should have cut it down to the shoulders enlarged the render to make it the focal then added some nice complimentary CD4's around the image that blend and add a nice flow. Play around with photofilters they can add a really nice final touch you could also have added some cool magical/lightning effects around his hand to give it some nice action.

    Text wise the font is just the wrong choice, I suck at text myself but maybe a little bigger and try to find a font that compliments the rest of the piece blending in but not too much. It's ok to leave the text out too don't feel like you need to put it in the signature I often leave out the text when I just can't get it right.

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Sub Zero.

    still putting out work?

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    You need to add a little more on that background 'çause it looks plain.

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    still putting out work?
    Sometimes I do, lol. what about you?

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    I think with another background would be better

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Sub Zero.

    not so much anymore.

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    Re: Sub Zero.

    I think change background would be better




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