[TAG] Burning

[Slati93]

c&c appreciated :3

 

[Razer]

Very nice! Clean and simple. The only thing I don't particularly like is the text, i.e font and color.
If it were changed, it'd be perfect imho.

 

[ChewBecca]

I really dont like the empty space on the left and right. I think that if you put the girl further to the left, and had the empty space there it would look better, but im not too sure about it. Its something I would need to see to be sure about.

 

[Razer]

I really dont like the empty space on the left and right. I think that if you put the girl further to the left, and had the empty space there it would look better, but im not too sure about it. Its something I would need to see to be sure about.

Wouldn't work, imho. Mainly because she's leaning to the left, so having her face so close to the edge, and all that blank space behind her; It just wouldn't look right to me.

 

[ChewBecca]

Wouldn't work, imho. Mainly because she's leaning to the left, so having her face so close to the edge, and all that blank space behind her; It just wouldn't look right to me.

There are so many cases in photography where this exact example works fantastically. It applies to all forms of art. Its called 3rds. As she is so close to being dead centre it makes it look like she is really out of place with all the dead space around her. Having her to the left or right (imo would look better to the left) would means that she is in 2/3 of the frame and look like she is suppose to be there.
When doing this though, I do mean to crop the extra space down a bit too, cropping up the bottom as well as the side to maintain the height to width ratio.

 

[Z1ls]

Luv this one, your work is amazing as always <3

 

[Slati93]

Thanks everyone for the kind words! I really appreciate it!
@Becca next time I will listen to you, and will work on the render's position!

Cheerz!

 

[iamgurb]

Tag looks nice, with a few canvas changes, it could look amazing.
But I dislike the text :