Criticize pls.

[NubPro]

title says all :d

practicing ><
I want it to be a 3D view album thingy but awww...ends up really nt exactly I want it to be
it looks really freaking weird....ikr

 

[brans94]

I really like this! The bear is adorable <3

Have you coded it yet?

 

[Wafuz]

Well you have nice pictures there. Nothing really special about the design to be honest. It would be cool if it was actually in 3D.

 

[iamgurb]

Each picture does not give the sense of "flow" when you move your eye onto the next.
It just feels like PICTURE1. PICTURE 2. PICTURE 3. PICTURE 4. Like just being thrown right in front of you, if you know what I mean.

 

[NubPro]

Each picture does not give the sense of "flow" when you move your eye onto the next.
It just feels like PICTURE1. PICTURE 2. PICTURE 3. PICTURE 4. Like just being thrown right in front of you, if you know what I mean.

appreciate a lot!
that's wut I meant in my mind tbh

 

[MrStormccH]

it cool...but...why and top , and the bottom no colour ? it will more cool if got colour

 

[NubPro]

it cool...but...why and top , and the bottom no colour ? it will more cool if got colour

tiz is kinda failed piece of work

//request trash
I'm quite disappointment of myself awww

 

[Matt Clarke]

It's good, but there is no "WOW" sort of thing on it.

 

[Scratch]

I don't like those fancy titles with effects and stuff, I like that blue gradient at pinguins, but I don't like the font you've used. I assume this is a Mobile version of a gallery?

I really like this! The bear is adorable <3

Have you coded it yet?

dude.... /facepalm, its a Koala not a bear

 

[NubPro]

I don't like those fancy titles with effects and stuff, I like that blue gradient at pinguins, but I don't like the font you've used. I assume this is a Mobile version of a gallery?




dude.... /facepalm, its a Koala not a bear

it was suppose to be a information centre where I can store my personal stuff/info, but ends up turning into a mobile gallery
yea I know the font, but I don't know which font it is which is the same default website font, any ideas?

 

[Manova]

What is this again?

 

[NubPro]

shxt actually

 

[Manova]

Your words, not mine.

 

[NubPro]

Your words, not mine.

crap...it's a gallery actually.

 

[ChewBecca]

I stopped myself posting before because I couldnt find anything nice to say about it haha

like gurb said the images to flow, the text is rubbish and the gallery design is just bleh! Make the gallery design simple but stylish then think about images for the gallery and making them flow together. Trust me, making a set of images flow is like one of the hardest things a photographer can do. Ive spent like 4 hours moving images around just to get a nice flowing set.

I also feel that the images which are black and white shouldnt have been converted to black and white. They appear to be images that would be full of colour, and to have them as black and white all of the depth from them just leaves. For black and white you need strong contrasts between black and white, and a lot of textures for it to look stunning.

Sorry I couldnt find anything nice to say, I dont like to just have a wall of hate