[DOCU] I made a short doc about my dementia-suffering grandmother.

[ThomasMcNaught]

Hey,

I recently made a short documentary for my college project about my 84-year-old grandmother who suffers from dementia. I will be handing it tomorrow and was wondering if I could get some feedback – it would be much appreciated.

[video]http://www.vimeo.com/thomasmcnaught/alice[/video]

Thanks,
Thomas.

 

[drksage]

- make "ALICE" in the bolder font that you used
- I would change the ending credit "with thanks to..." to "special thanks to..."

Other than that, it looks good. Sad to see old people like this, especially when you know one day you may be like them.

 

[ThomasMcNaught]

Thanks for your comment, I've actually just updated the video file to one with a bolder font.

Regards,
Thomas.