My first attempt for a comic

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    My first attempt for a comic

    `lol` and `loml`



    Made in mspaint and its my first free attempt without reading a tutorial or using resources from websites :wiggle: so don't flame me if it sucks XD.


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    Back In Action Hobbit is offline
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    I wouldn't personnaly submit anything if i knew it was bad.....

    Read some tutorials before you post your next comic... Please for the good of everyone :D

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    not bad for the first time, tbh.

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    Infraction Banned Josh is offline
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    wtf?..

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    My new one (well i am not going to colorize them). I am sure you will like this, i was laughing when i was thinking of the script.

    Presenting "Becaming a GM is easy"
    (in mspaint also)



    the happening isn't true of course XD

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    30 Seconds. Genryu is offline
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    Loml I like them both :P

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    Grand Master Mara is offline
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    Nice... :)

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    Grand Master Leo is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by [GR]SiLvER
    My new one (well i am not going to colorize them). I am sure you will like this, i was laughing when i was thinking of the script.

    Presenting "Becaming a GM is easy"
    (in mspaint also)



    the happening isn't true of course XD
    LOL, thats a nice one :)

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    Father InTrO is offline
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    yeah nice one

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    This is how the characters were developed ( the latest will be used in my 4th strip ;p)


    This is the third one (not as funny as the second tho)
    Called I am AFK mate.

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    Grand Master Jakob is offline
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    Not bad...

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    Grand Master MrMonkey is offline
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    Don't use spray for the borders of each box, it gets muddled up. Same with the speech bubbles, try and make things have harder lines if you're going to use Black And White, make everything more defined basically. Work on the Scripts aswell, they're funny, but could be better :P

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    Grand Master Leo is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by [GR]SiLvER
    This is how the characters were developed ( the latest will be used in my 4th strip ;p)


    This is the third one (not as funny as the second tho)
    Called I am AFK mate.

    ROFL I love the part when he says he got banned and then he said "I am AFK Mate" and the gm was talking to him and he didnt answered, rofl thats nice.

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by MrMonkey
    Don't use spray for the borders of each box, it gets muddled up. Same with the speech bubbles, try and make things have harder lines if you're going to use Black And White, make everything more defined basically. Work on the Scripts aswell, they're funny, but could be better :P
    The borders & the bubbles will be like that in the next strip, i have done what you said but haven't thought anything about the scipt yet, my sister is disturbing me and i cannot think anything...

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    Grand Master MrMonkey is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by [GR]SiLvER
    The borders & the bubbles will be like that in the next strip, i have done what you said but haven't thought anything about the scipt yet, my sister is disturbing me and i cannot think anything...
    Script about a sister disturbing her brother. Take your ideas from real life ;)

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    Bla Bla bla painInflicter is offline
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    My lame comic

    well im still developing with silver

    rite silver?

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    yeah xD @ MrMonkey, i am trying to represent a parody of my life with AnGEL.
    (happenings aren't true of course xD)
    Last edited by [GR]SiLvER; 30-04-06 at 07:34 PM.

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    The Penguinator Boko is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by painInflicter
    My lame comic

    well im still developing with silver

    rite silver?
    lewl, that was ownage tbh xD

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    Fuck you, I'm a dragon Pieman is offline
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    wtf...

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    Grand Master SkylineMaster is offline
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    wont say anything rofl

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    Newbie theshark is offline
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    preety good

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    F**KIN LEGEND! exclamatio is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by theshark
    preety good

    did u really even read them?

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    Thats kind of stupid if you ask me. I dont wanna be mean but you cant draw >.>

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    Grand Master [GR]SiLvER is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by cameronmd
    Thats kind of stupid if you ask me. I dont wanna be mean but you cant draw >.>
    Well, can you do better with the spray in m$paint? (if you are reffering to the first). At all, exams start in a while so i guess i got the inspiration to make comics at the wrong time.

    If anyone cares :

    strip 5 - "The gayish server" (extremely crappy script, inspired by thenoobcomic ep50)


    strip 3 - redesigned



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