Night

[Negata]

It's dark and nearing 12 o'clock
From your wardrobe you hear a knock

Alone in your room, you begin to fear
Hide behind your pillow, on your cheek a tear

There are no monsters - that's what your father said,
You think, as a claw reaches for you from under your bed

You scream and hurry to switch on the light
The last time you watched horror movies at night


Inspired by a dream last night, which was quite different than this. However it made me realize what I'm afraid of in life and furthermore, that in the end adults and children both base their fears on the same thing: the unknown, and the uncontrollable. Having just checked the "your greatest fear" thread, I suppose I could say my greatest fear is in not being in control of everything happening around me.

[MentaL]

[Iron Maiden]

Well said. Holy **** that was deep. Made me think...

[Ramuthra]

nice poem you got talent.

[Konrow]

thats a great poem. i like it.

[Genryu]

Teh truezors I r teh cry now.

[Rishwin]

thats pretty deep, i like it :)

[Loxx]

Damn, that really touched me...i don't know what to say except nice poem really.

[Pieman]

oh sex-c really nice, tad bit childish tho

[Negata]

oh sex-c really nice, tad bit childish tho

Ah yes, in fact I considered it a bit humorous.

All authors are fond of compliments and I'm no exception. Thanks all :)

[Boko]

Nice poem man, got any more? :tp:

[Pieman]

Nice poem man, got any more? :tp:

make one about porn :D

[exclamatio]

i like it m8, simple, straight to the point, flows well.

i feel the same, i dont likef eeling out of control

and i am honestly afraid of the dark, i like the comfort light gives

[Ionic & Schizo]

make one about porn :D

http://forum.ragezone.com/post391552.html

^Way back when. Not porn though.

[The_Gatekeeper_]

touche negata :p

here's one off the top of my head :p

little fingers pry your eyes open to see what's inside
bleeing from the pain and nowhere to hide,

you lie in terror and wait
knowing at a point your body's going to break,

you sense a tingling in your bloody hand
fearing for the worst like a ***** little man,

the swelling of your eyes are too much to take
and you make yourself a blood-filled lake

:ohmy: lol how was that?

[Spark]

i like it m8, simple, straight to the point, flows well.

i feel the same, i dont likef eeling out of control

and i am honestly afraid of the dark, i like the comfort light gives

i love the dark, it strange

[Negata]

and i am honestly afraid of the dark, i like the comfort light gives

You do? I was going to say something like as people grow up they change fear of the dark to something else, but in fact darkness still makes me somewhat uneasy. The monsters from my closet have (for the most part :tp:) changed to something else, say, a stalker or a drug addict to name a few examples, but I still don't like the dark even if it contradicts my preference to stay up at nights.

I hate horror movies. I get too deep into the movie and then any surprises scare the heck out of me, and sometimes afterwards I keep seeing things. A jacket can quite easily become a threatening ghost.

http://forum.ragezone.com/post391552.html

^Way back when. Not porn though.

Man, I had the feeling someone might dig it up. There goes my status down the drain.. :no:

[exclamatio]

aye i feel people think about different types of dark

the dark i fear is an open darkness, a great vast sea of unknown.
i fear the things u can feel in the dark

[Spark]

aye i feel people think about different types of dark

the dark i fear is an open darkness, a great vast sea of unknown.i fear the things u can feel in the dark

see thats the type of darkness i love hehe

[ChojiroShintaro]

What I truly fear is England not winning the World Cup!!! lol
All I fear is that my brain will die when I die =( I love myself *masturbates*
I fear the light, because I'm part vampire, it makes me weak...I like blood...and the shadows, or you lovely hunnnies, I wish I cuold suck you all day long!!1

[GOD]

Good poem

[xeLJoYo]

cool stuff.
made one myself some time ago too:

As I fall down and everything stops to be
The pain finally fades, it all seems good to me

Then suddenly it all comes back
And I hear you laughing as I break my neck.



kinda dark, I know, I'll try a happy one next time :D

[Konrow]

touche negata :p

here's one off the top of my head :p

little fingers pry your eyes open to see what's inside
bleeing from the pain and nowhere to hide,

you lie in terror and wait
knowing at a point your body's going to break,

you sense a tingling in your bloody hand
fearing for the worst like a ***** little man,

the swelling of your eyes are too much to take
and you make yourself a blood-filled lake

:ohmy: lol how was that?

you scare me :cry:

[Askill3]

Very nice poem!

[Mara]

nice.

i once dream about a theater and i was holding some kind of sword and killing vampires. yeezz i need to stop watching TV

[The_Gatekeeper_]

you scare me :cry:

lol it's easy to come up with something like that :p.

sometimes I wonder if I should write a book about all of this.