Video I made - Beatrice

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    Johnny RsX is offline
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    Video I made - Beatrice

    http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...674&q=beatrice


    What do you think? (This isnt a video for entertainment, its to get professional comments on how the video was)

    Animated by me, plot and voice by 2 of my friends.


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    PLOT (READ AFTER WATCHING AND TELL ME IF THIS IS WHAT YOU THOUGHT)

    Alien gets upset at beatrices music - It's too loud and it is disturbing all the aliens on mars.
    Beatrice gets mad and tries to shoot the alien.
    Beatrice gets nervous and SHITS HIMSELF.
    After a while he throws his poo on the alien.
    The alien gets mad and uses his telekenetik powers on Beartice to get him to shoot up.
    The alien breaks his Metallica disc and then leaves.
    Beatrice falls back down, after being shot up by the alien, a few hours later and cries over his disc like a baby.
    "THE END" sign hits Beatrice in the head

    Credits
    Last edited by RsX; 21-01-06 at 02:25 AM.


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    Grand Master Hitsu is offline
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    wow it's about alien =P

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    Grand Master Leo is offline
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    C00l :d

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    Johnny RsX is offline
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    Thanks :)
    Posted a plot above. Please tell me if thats what u thought it was when you first watched it :)

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    /\/\@573|2 NoPeace is offline
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    Stupid and random as I said before. :tp:

    NoPeace - out

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    Grand Master Obbob is offline
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    Cool :P

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    Johnny RsX is offline
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    Was the plot what u thought it was? :P

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    EMAG EHT TSOL TSUJ UOY AlLoCuRa is offline
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    LOL
    that sucked...

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    Sorcerer Supreme hansen is offline
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    Not only was the animation semi good but it had a unique taste to it. It's watchable.

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    Grand Master Smo is offline
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    I want 27 seconds of my life back.

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    Grand Master Gabrieth is offline
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    Not my kind of entertainment ... sorry ...

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    Grand Master Hybr!d is offline
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    Hehe I like anything that is different!! Good work

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    Just_meandLittle_Lucy Evilkitten is offline
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    Random but sorry, not as good as I would have liked it to be =/

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    Johnny RsX is offline
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    The beginning part is just an interview, shoudlnt have added it :P watch everything if you didnt before.

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    Grand Master Ionic & Schizo is offline
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    Hey! RsX. You remember that 1 minute flash you did ages ago that had a skateboarder doing flips and shit with music in the background? & it ended with the guy flying off the screen (or something to that effect)?

    That was better.

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    dAI for president. MentaL is offline
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    What no boobs?

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    Captain of the Universe Rishwin is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by MentaL
    What no boobs?
    woot, maybe in the encore presentation? :eek:

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    ...

    Sorry, but that just plain sucked. Storyline is about as crappy as it gets, what the hell is wrong with Metallica being played loud and why do I get the distinct feeling this is the result of a few very frustrated teenies who can't stand metalheads but are to weak to do something about it themselfs?

    Not to mention the sound sometimes isn't synchronised with the movie, Beatrice's mouth just keeps flapping even when he doesn't say anything and for crying out loud, use some default sounds for the beaming up/down!

    My advice: watch a few episodes of the first star-trek. Then come up with a good plot. Then copy sound from those StarTrek episodes in some way to make Shatner say stuff like 'Ooh, I shit my pants' or something (keeping your level of humor here).

    Also, learn to draw. The alien was quite good, the rest just plain sucky.

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    Johnny RsX is offline
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    Quote Originally Posted by FragFrog
    ...

    Sorry, but that just plain sucked. Storyline is about as crappy as it gets, what the hell is wrong with Metallica being played loud and why do I get the distinct feeling this is the result of a few very frustrated teenies who can't stand metalheads but are to weak to do something about it themselfs?

    Not to mention the sound sometimes isn't synchronised with the movie, Beatrice's mouth just keeps flapping even when he doesn't say anything and for crying out loud, use some default sounds for the beaming up/down!

    My advice: watch a few episodes of the first star-trek. Then come up with a good plot. Then copy sound from those StarTrek episodes in some way to make Shatner say stuff like 'Ooh, I shit my pants' or something (keeping your level of humor here).

    Also, learn to draw. The alien was quite good, the rest just plain sucky.
    They didnt really plan for it to be "good"

    It was just a psss-the-time kinda thing, then they decided to post it for fun and here it is :P

    I just made the background... and the ufo and alien... Everything else they did themselves, i didnt even know what it would be about.

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    Grand Master FragFrog is offline
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    Mmm.. wel, at least the ufo and alien looked pretty good I suppose :D

    Ah well, as long as you guys had fun! ;)

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    Darkhearts cameronmd is offline
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    Thats some stupid $hit lol, funny though.

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    Grand Master JHawk is offline
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    w....t....f

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    Sorcerer Supreme hansen is offline
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    It was a start. It'll lead into another part of an even better movie.

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    Infraction Banned Josh is offline
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    Random... o_0.
    The alien has a funny voice =P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.X
    Random... o_0.
    The alien has a funny voice =P

    wait.. you mean accent?



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