Last edited by Tiretism; 18-11-11 at 06:11 PM.
link to render of the 2nd sig please :)
the first sign need to get more work at the c4d. somehow its not working with the background
They look to be on the right track just get a similar colour flow through them and perhaps have nothing that looks out of place like the random white sheet in the second one?
First one:
There isn't any actual flow on it, nor lighting, though I like it, the color scheme is really good and fits with the render, however the C4D on the back of the render, ruins it, still, good signature.
Second one:
Second one is amazing, like the idea of it, however I think it could be improved more than that if you spent more time on it, because the white/grey C4D doesn't really fit with orange, good signature overall :).