6th sig [crit again plz]

[shadowster]

I know its still not perfect.
is this any better?



If not plz tell me where i could improve on.

I think i could find some better text.

*NOTE* i made it in gimp

edited version



Is it any better?

[MentaL]

[Genryu]

Its ok but focus on blending the render with the background next time.

[Squares]

Like Genryu Said, Try Blending The Render A Bit More.
I Think Font Is Too Big, And Too Close Too Focal.
Not Much More I Can Say, Dont Know Anything About Gimp.
But Other Than That, Keep Going, Pretty Good For Somwhat Begginer In Graphix.

[HeavenlyGifted]

Nice =] Using gimp ay. But you should clean the background

[Mayflair]

I like it :D

[ChewBecca]

gimp lol
what a silly name for a program

[shadowster]

Is the second one any better?