A Lingering Smile

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    A Lingering Smile

    Made a new tag, took bout 30mins =p
    personally, i think it looks a bit plain but....



    c&c?

    V2:
    Last edited by Atron; 20-11-08 at 10:00 PM.


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    Newbie Venum is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    Very Nice.

    I Like The Shadow.

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    Grand Master HeavenlyFlow is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    I agree with your 'plain' statement.

    Colors don't really blend/flow well throughout the tag.

    Wireframe touch is always good, just make sure if it's in the background it doesn't stick out more than it needs to. IE: the left side.

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    Anime Network NTV is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    oooo
    anime :p
    i would rate this 7/10.
    i like the anime lingerie reminds me of henta_

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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    Good job. I would rate it 6/10!

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    Grand Master Shagakrath is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    I like the back lights, they are really cool and the image of the girl convines with the color.

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    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    Quote Originally Posted by Domo View Post
    oooo
    anime :p
    i would rate this 7/10.
    i like the anime lingerie reminds me of henta_
    Lol @ henta_

    Anyway, looks pretty good.
    Shadows don't fit too well.
    Plain.

    5/10

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    Senior Clysse is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    texting isnt amazing

    but good job on this

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    meh, finally got off my ass and tried to patch this tag up a bit

    tried to put more stuff in to make it less plain
    btw the border is white so u probably cant see it xD


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    Visit my hompage Vi3tb0i2ty is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    ahh need some work on the text but good job :P

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    Senior Clysse is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    it was better before imo

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    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    I like the 2nd one,
    cause the 1st one is to faded away
    nice job though :)!

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    okay, v4 and v5
    made the text clearer and the render's less......orangey

    v4:

    v5:

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    Grand Master Shagakrath is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    v1 plain
    v2 dark effects added.

    I prefer v2

    in V4 & V3 I see those the same

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    Elite Member Harbour is offline
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    Re: A Lingering Smile

    Quote Originally Posted by Shagakrath View Post
    v1 plain
    v2 dark effects added.

    I prefer v2

    in V4 & V3 I see those the same
    4's got another c4d on it, top left.



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