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Grand Master
A man of science

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7...labcopyrs7.jpg
I know that the bg is screwed, so please just judge on the render and the text. If i get any suggestions on a better bg, then i will make it better.
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bensonhu
Re: A man of science
I like the effects on the render but the canvas is a bit large for my tastes. Also, you might want some other font, I use simple ones, nothing too fancy. Try a dark grey background and add effects ( c4ds and such )
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is lovin' it
Re: A man of science
This could have turned in something really good but you messed it a bit... no flow with the render and the background... Also the text is really bad... Keep the render with its smudge (?) and try making a background that has some white, orange and black. My oppinion only.
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Grand Master
Re: A man of science
Too fuzzy and the text got real screwed up.
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Catz
Re: A man of science
Text and bg are screwed up.
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Grand Master
Re: A man of science
Ok, this is pissing me off. READ WHAT MY ORIGINAL POST SAYS! It clearly states, " I know that the bg is screwed, so please just judge on the render and the text"
Please read people. And now that i relook the text, yah it is screwed.
Hymen, do you know what flow is even? Flow is the direction the RENDER and the BACKGROUND both have a motion towards. ( You get most of the flow in with the background...) And by the way, there is no smudge in the render... so what's did you mean by " Keep the render with its smudge (?) "
Also, what would be in this White, Orange and Black BG anyways, just random colors there with no real effects or anything.
Last edited by Rainwizzard; 01-05-08 at 11:55 AM.
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is lovin' it
Re: A man of science
What I meant with flow was that the render and the background didn't match together... Look up for the word "flow" in the dictionary, it means having a "smooth continuity".
Also, if you want comments on your sig, people won't only mention the render or only the effects, but the whole images as one. That's what a sig is.
I'm trully sorry, I thought there was smudge on the render. I wasn't sure so that's why there is a question mark after that comment.
About the background colors, I'm sorry but they weren't random. White to go with the jacket, orange to go with the skin, black to go with the shirt. So there is a flow.
Again, I'm so sorry to comment a bad signature made from a person who can't take some comments.
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Grand Master
Re: A man of science
Did you mean a peach-ish color of orange? (skin color)
And i specificallyt asked for people to just rate the render and text.
Last edited by Rainwizzard; 01-05-08 at 04:12 PM.
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is lovin' it
Re: A man of science
No, I meant a skin-ish color of orange lol. And this is the signature section, we rate the sigs as a whole signature, not only the render and the text.
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Grand Master
Re: A man of science
Alright then, sorry for flipping but i posted specifically to please ignore the BG for now until i get a good idea for it.