well i dont think this is an improvement.. but u be the judge.. gosh need more practice but i think enough for today ^^
dunno what to do with the god damn font xD
well i dont think this is an improvement.. but u be the judge.. gosh need more practice but i think enough for today ^^
dunno what to do with the god damn font xD
Hm, your effects and everything overal has improved. But now blend the render and make some flow and depth.
Add a more visible border too.
