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  1. #1
    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Another Try!

    Well I read some tuts and this is my second attempt >.<.




    C&C thanks :)


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    -sama SeraphiPod is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Wow,
    That's really Good :D,

    The Character, the background :D..
    Did you use some brushes or tjust gradients?

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    Re: Another Try!

    Thanks :)

    I used some C4d's and used some gradients .. I really didn't use any brushes except the default ones

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    -sama SeraphiPod is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Haha,
    Err, did you read the Timeshift?
    haha, It confuses me alot :D

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    Grand Master blyddlyl is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    No flow no depth, text didnt work well, its like 4 layers, 2 c4d layer 1 render layer and text layer. Nothing special

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    Grand Master Grasna is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    No flow no depth, text didnt work well, its like 4 layers, 2 c4d layer 1 render layer and text layer. Nothing special
    your sig;



    His sig;



    I see no difference.

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    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    SeraphiPod: Lol I just read it.

    blyddlyl: O.o, any tips?

    Grasna:Lol
    :)

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    Grand Master blyddlyl is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Quote Originally Posted by Grasna View Post
    your sig;



    His sig;



    I see no difference.
    Blehs read before you post :) Thats Dachi made for me it isn't mine.

    Try reading tutorial

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    She knows Dachi made that.

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    Grand Master blyddlyl is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    She knows Dachi made that.
    Well if she knows why she put Your sig? Please dont get offtopic

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    Sorcerer Supreme ReyMysterio is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Nice Work ... more practice on the text ... and on the right corner the white background i dont like it

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    Grand Master Amandy is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Off-topic are two different words.

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    Grand Master alexdesire is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Work on your text and contrast.

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    Well if she knows why she put Your sig? Please dont get offtopic
    She means theres no difference.
    There both a c4d background with a image on top.
    And how everyone thinks dachi is the best on rz.
    She's trying to prove a point.
    Don't post back with something smart, i'm just explaining.

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    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Lol wow.. Lets all just chill :)

    ReyMysterio: Thanks :) I see what your talkin' about and I will try to fix it.

    FullMetalKite: Im still not getting some of this and thanks for the pointers! I'll do my best to work more on Text and Contrast :)

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    No flow no depth, text didnt work well, its like 4 layers, 2 c4d layer 1 render layer and text layer. Nothing special
    Quote Originally Posted by Grasna View Post
    your sig;



    His sig;



    I see no difference.
    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    Blehs read before you post :) Thats Dachi made for me it isn't mine.

    Try reading tutorial
    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    She knows Dachi made that.
    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    Well if she knows why she put Your sig? Please dont get offtopic
    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    She means theres no difference.
    There both a c4d background with a image on top.
    And how everyone thinks dachi is the best on rz.
    She's trying to prove a point.
    Don't post back with something smart, i'm just explaining.
    I've told you earlier blyddlyl,
    please don't be acting all smart.

    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    No flow no depth, text didnt work well, its like 4 layers, 2 c4d layer 1 render layer and text layer. Nothing special
    that really got to me since,
    well, your basically describing the sigs you make?

    obviously, you need tutorials and he can probably get better?
    this is like his 2nd try? idk.
    but you have had millions of tries and they are all in messy style
    with 2 layers probably + render + c4d + text
    "Nothing special"
    Maybe think before post.

    anyways,, let me get onto topic,
    the text is alright, it could be better but don't worry about that yet,
    don't ever use text until your skill gets better, from what i believed in, skill comes first.
    it is blended well but honestly, bad choice of colors :P
    nice try with it, and read some good tuts lol.
    the TIMEshift tutorial is really great.
    pm me if you want some great tuts i have been using.

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    Vous Pas Reel HotelUnderSeige is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    allready better then me lol

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    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    purpleNblack2: K i will take you on that offer :D

    HotelUnderSeige: Lol naw.

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    5UP3Rcr3vv Sundays is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    Hmmzomg!

    The text is distracting i dislike the outer glow and the colors are really weird.

    go pratice maor! =P

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    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    just a note, I am using ps 7 cause I cant get CS1 and my laptop cant connect to the net because my LAN is wack...

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    Newbie ZionTx is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    to what i see... the contrast from red to white is to suddenly, maybe transition it into a blend.

    I liked the text.. though maybe if you wanted it to stand out more you could have had the c4d right under it, just a thought.

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    Sorcerer Supreme khosh is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    looks good nice XD 10/10

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    Grand Master cowjuice is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    colours dont work well imo, jst seems too weird
    but nice try =] keep on practicing ^^

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    Member BlazingCookies is offline
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    Re: Another Try!

    ZionTx: Hmmm, aite I will give it a try. :)

    khosh: Lol.. Thanks? :D

    cowjuice: Ok. Thanks for the tips, I'll try to get a better color choice :).

    Only reason I used the red was because it matched the shirt :P. I have posted my third attempt so please take a look at that also.

    Thanks so much peeps,
    Alen Andy (BlazingCookies)



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