[Attempt 3] Fail or succeed?

[PixmaDragon]

hi guys u may have seen my second attempt =====> http://forum.ragezone.com/f147/attem...ucceed-542395/ i have a good feeling i diidnt fail hard this time!

[MentaL]

[iJFAC]

Cool, didn't fail =D!.. Great ^^

Congratz ..

I rate 10/10

[purpleNblack2]

hi guys u may have seen my second attempt =====> http://forum.ragezone.com/f147/attem...ucceed-542395/ i have a good feeling i diidnt fail hard this time!

the text is fail..
everything is very sharp
blur is good
render is too oversized.. resize it
but still the overall isn't so bad.. good job

[PixmaDragon]

oh yea first 2 good comments thanks guys! any suggestions on text?

[iJFAC]

Energy Lines on text :P.. and don't know more xD

[alexdesire]

Wrong section......