[Attempt 5] Fail or succeed?

[PixmaDragon]

So this is my 5th attempt and only 1 has passed as a succeed... I took some advice to put some life into the text and such and such.......


4th attempt <----------------- http://forum.ragezone.com/f147/attem...ucceed-544796/

[MentaL]

[Tyler]

Personally i think its a great improvement.
The render blends well with the background colourwise, but when it comes to lighting, they're slightly off.
Other than that. Well done! Succeed!

[bobble]

its decent, though the render itself needs work also the different textures that the eye perceives by comparing the render and the Bg seem too split.

[PixmaDragon]

I got the render I think from Laced's Resource Pack and I love all his renders =) and whats an eye perceives?

[KiwiYogurt]

i say fail. need better cuts on render. and used the render as background fails. imo

[PixmaDragon]

i say fail. need better cuts on render. and used the render as background fails. imo

shhh quit revealing my secrets -__-' im noob k geet over it....

[xcelinex33]

Its better :)

[iLuv Scott]

What exactly was done? poorly cut render and smudged with defult settings?

[patrickisit]

It's good, but not great.

On the renders, the edges are all pixal-y
Should try bluring them?

[blyddlyl]

Text is alright, theres little flow. Try to smudge the render according to your background, try to change the colour of your texting. give it depth and stop putting Attempt ** and Fail or Succeed

[purpleNblack2]

Text is alright, theres little flow. Try to smudge the render according to your background, try to change the colour of your texting. give it depth and stop putting Attempt ** and Fail or Succeed

he has the right to title it whatever and however he wants,
so you could shut your little mouth on that.
Speaking of little mouth, why not give some cnc to your own tags, like I am doing, if you are going to give a cnc like that, why do your tags never look as close? i mean,
i do give some cnc over my level, but I do try to get close to my cnc inlike you.
your tags do not have depth and do not have flow or anything xP work on it.

and pixel, nice try, but you flunked within that attempt. because it is too tad (plain).
for your next attempt i would probably design your background using your render like smudge it, liquify some parts, ripple and erase all the bad parts, so there would be like 2 ripples left, and like add effect c4ds.
all i have to say. nice try still.

[PixmaDragon]

he has the right to title it whatever and however he wants,
so you could shut your little mouth on that.
Speaking of little mouth, why not give some cnc to your own tags, like I am doing, if you are going to give a cnc like that, why do your tags never look as close? i mean,
i do give some cnc over my level, but I do try to get close to my cnc inlike you.
your tags do not have depth and do not have flow or anything xP work on it.

and pixel, nice try, but you flunked within that attempt. because it is too tad (plain).
for your next attempt i would probably design your background using your render like smudge it, liquify some parts, ripple and erase all the bad parts, so there would be like 2 ripples left, and like add effect c4ds.
all i have to say. nice try still.

umm im nub please answer me whats a cnc and a tag? tag as in making a tag to post it or the writing on the signature. cause if its the writing on the signature... i know im thinking but i have no inspiration atm so don't know what i can say.

[cybrax]

lol succed but it could be greater hehe :P 7/10