Beast o.o

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    Sorcerer Supreme x3Vivi is offline
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    Beast o.o



    Still needs lots of help here. c&c is highly welcomed.

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    Last edited by x3Vivi; 16-05-09 at 03:33 AM.


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    Sorcerer Supreme HoneyDew is offline
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    Re: Beast o.o

    What I Think Is, The Left Side With Red Paints On It Looks Ugly.
    And The Render Kinda Blur.Others Is Good.

    5/10 Not Really Liked It.

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    Sorcerer Supreme x3Vivi is offline
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    Re: Beast o.o

    Hmm, The render already had the paint thing on it, i think its a bag or something o.o

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    Sorcerer Supreme HoneyDew is offline
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    Re: Beast o.o

    Hmm, I Liked v2, Much better XD.

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    Sorcerer Supreme x3Vivi is offline
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    Re: Beast o.o

    Same =) loool. Much darker lines.

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    Re: Beast o.o

    wel what I think you should probably work on a little is the red bg c4d's they look wel idk, you should blur some of them at least I think... ;) and add some fx I think would make it overall more appealing... ;) left is where the render is, best of the sig even imo... ;)
    do think the dept is pretty nice... could be a little better, and text closed to focal... is best to go anyways, kill the border and crop it a little I think, also the render/focal takes up half the sig, wich means its to big.... so try and work on that a little for a next sig probably....

    but overall pretty alright tag... gj on this, and kiu

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    Re: Beast o.o

    Hey thanks for the advice <3

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    Re: Beast o.o

    Text's good now..
    :P.. there's a bubble c4d.. cool... but I suggest, on erasing the cuts to soft.. I mean..
    I can see some cuts, cause I know since I use bubbles and most c4d most and, there's most c4ds that are not on Trans.. and setting to other modes makes it well...

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    Sorcerer Supreme x3Vivi is offline
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    Re: Beast o.o

    Roger, ima be making one right now.



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