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  1. #1
    FML ChronoTrigger is offline
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    Broken.





    Heh, when I first thought of the idea of this sig, it sounded pretty good. But it didn't come out at all they I wanted it to. I planned on scrapping this because I really don't like it myself, lol. But, since I spent so much time on it, I figured I'd post. The "broken" part means he's....broken. As you can tell from the armor.


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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Nice concept.
    I work work on the bg a bit more, but it might mess it up, not sure what to really say
    I love the concept though

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    Grand Master Venereal is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    The text is doesn't work. You put a pink/purple brush over his face? then changed the layer settings? that should be taken out because the color doesn't match the rest of the signature. The smudging on his neck is kind of ugly but the flow is spot on.

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    Grand Master alexdesire is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Needs to be more chaotic in the background work on lighting also.

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    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    The color around the render's head is ugly and the fx next to the render on the left are out of place.

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    That's not FX
    That's splatter lulul

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    Re: Broken.

    v2 added.

    And that's smudging. o_o

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    Grand Master Venereal is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Quote Originally Posted by ChronoTrigger78 View Post
    v2 added.

    And that's smudging. o_o
    You moved the text and changed the color to match the face?

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    FML ChronoTrigger is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Quote Originally Posted by Venereal View Post
    You moved the text and changed the color to match the face?
    Did I? I can't really tell. At all.

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    Grand Master Venereal is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Quote Originally Posted by ChronoTrigger78 View Post
    Did I? I can't really tell. At all.
    It makes a good avatar.

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    Quote Originally Posted by ChronoTrigger78 View Post
    Did I? I can't really tell. At all.
    Haha
    Gg, nt venereal, maybe next time -winks-

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    Grand Master alexdesire is offline
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    Re: Broken.

    V1 looks better imo. V2 looks to monotone.



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