[Bt] Hang in there [IM]

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    Preparing Riizq is offline
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    [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    I am starting to get interested in this section.






    C&C

    I know am still a rookie, but I am sure that you guys will help me become better.


    Edit v2:


    Edit v3 ( Final attempt )
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    Selfish Bastard Z1ls is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Font doesn't blend on the signature in any kind and you shouldn't use right down corner for your name, because there are many other places on the signature too.


    The render doesn't blend on the background, so it looks kinda odd, use signature tutorials and you'll become better alot faster...

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    Preparing Riizq is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    What about this v2?


    I like my name in corners ( looks pro )

    Thanks

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    Sorcerer Supreme Keez is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Quote Originally Posted by ManiacButcher View Post
    What about this v2?


    I like my name in corners ( looks pro )

    Thanks
    try better quality bg :D and smudge bit of the render

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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    The text doesnt really suit the sig. It is a hard part of any artistic peice really, text is really hard to get right! The background also doesnt go well with the render. Try using one that has colours from the render. Eg the reds or yellows.

    And for me it is a bit over contrasted, but that just may be my messed up little eyes :)

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    Preparing Riizq is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Quote Originally Posted by Keez View Post
    try better quality bg :D and smudge bit of the render
    It is a good quality Bg. Why it looked like a bad quality because the opacity & fill was low

    Quote Originally Posted by ChewBecca View Post
    The text doesnt really suit the sig. It is a hard part of any artistic peice really, text is really hard to get right! The background also doesnt go well with the render. Try using one that has colours from the render. Eg the reds or yellows.

    And for me it is a bit over contrasted, but that just may be my messed up little eyes :)
    Making the text suit the sig is hard, I will get better at it when I make more tag.

    Thank you Keez & Becca.

    Here is my final attempt at v3 ( I think this one is really better than others )

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    Sorcerer Supreme Keez is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Quote Originally Posted by ManiacButcher View Post
    It is a good quality Bg. Why it looked like a bad quality because the opacity & fill was low


    Making the text suit the sig is hard, I will get better at it when I make more tag.

    Thank you Keez & Becca.

    Here is my final attempt at v3 ( I think this one is really better than others )
    ok so coud u give me that render and i try somthing ?:D and show u an example only if u want sure :D

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    Numero uno tagger. Tiretism is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Work on the colors and on your bg, they're very dull and are unappealing to the eye.
    The numerous text ruins the tag, the color of the text, the placement and the blending.
    Try to place your text not too close to the focal and not too far from the focal as it gets very distracting.

    Work on your quality and on all of the basics, you need to read allot of tutorials allotallot.

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    Selfish Bastard Z1ls is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Quote Originally Posted by ManiacButcher View Post
    It is a good quality Bg. Why it looked like a bad quality because the opacity & fill was low


    Making the text suit the sig is hard, I will get better at it when I make more tag.

    Thank you Keez & Becca.

    Here is my final attempt at v3 ( I think this one is really better than others )
    Use mask and make it black&white and then it's 100% more nice than it's at this moment...

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    Flyff Developer Intelligence is offline
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    Re: [Bt] Hang in there [IM]

    Background is kinda weird. Doesn't fit ironman with it so I suggest to change and try to match it as well (I mean the colours)



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