Font looks bad. The left side is too empty, and the render is used waaaay too many times imo.
Don't use effects on fonts, and place it at another position, border wouldn't hurt though.
lower brightness bit plz other than that, yeah flawz said it all
maybe he likes this render very much? :)
is that smudge or c4d? cuz is to much thing
Pritty good love the work done on the render ,The text is bad and the left side is empty ,Needs a stroke .And maybe a dark coloured gradient map to make it not so bright .
Not bad tho ,4/10
yeh text to in the middle or not good on that side