DeeJay ~ Zen.

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    DeeJay ~ Zen.

    v1


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    it took all of 5mins, but i tried to make it very clean and simple, no fancy effects that distract from the image.


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    Grand Master ~DN is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    have a good sign but need more effect xD and shapes with a light focus

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    i added a light source, changed the border and sharpened it in v3

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    #bump

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    Grand Master xriss is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    Try smudging the arms of the focal to make it blend into the c4d's - try that.

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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    i will try it, and thanks for the advice

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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    looks rly bad to me... i just see a C4D with a render sticked on it... nothing else... ok maybe some effects... missing a lot of stuff... more and better filter, more blending, etc... keep trying and read some tuts.

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    it looks too plain for meh =S

    more effects needed

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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    i dont like it. the c4d doesnt fit in at all, overlay it or change the opacity on it.

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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    Quote Originally Posted by Atron View Post
    it looks too plain for meh =S

    more effects needed
    read my post. i said i wanted a SIMPLE tag WITHOUT much effects

    Quote Originally Posted by scrat55 View Post
    looks rly bad to me... i just see a C4D with a render sticked on it... nothing else... ok maybe some effects... missing a lot of stuff... more and better filter, more blending, etc... keep trying and read some tuts.
    fair enough. il try blending it some more, but i like the simplicity

    Quote Originally Posted by .BloodShed. View Post
    i dont like it. the c4d doesnt fit in at all, overlay it or change the opacity on it.
    ty for the C and C il try.

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    Elite Member Munchies is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    What'd you do to V3?

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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    Text could be a have a little more blending. But good job.

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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: DeeJay ~ Zen.

    Really really really really really really plain.

    The repeat of the render wasn't need, waste of space.

    The C4D you use is pretty plain, and it's not that exciting.

    And the text is boring as well.

    Needs some effects and what not done to it.



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