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[Flawz]

Pretty basic



C&C suggestions always welcomed.

[MentaL]

[SiK]

I like it, flows rather nicely. The background text gives the feeling of information escaping (hence the title).

[Flawz]

Thank you :>

[iNs@nE]

Good one. I always loved your choice of chick renders. Inspired me a lil bit. :D

You could get some nice text on it though.

[Flawz]

I'm having a hard time placing text on it =(

[iNs@nE]

I'm having a hard time placing text on it =(

You could try placing one with a good font on the white stroke thats goin up on the right hand side. Just and advice. See how it comes out.

[Flawz]

Messed around and messed up :> I'll try something tomorrow.

[.YourName]

the render just doesnt go :-\
try an eye or something like that :P

and i dont really like the text in the background

good colors though