Falling

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  1. #1
    Sorcerer Supreme Spycky is offline
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    Falling

    i know its terrible. i just dont know what to do nomore...

    V1

    V2


    CNC
    /10 plz


  2. #2
    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: Falling

    V1 is better.
    Just work on the text.

  3. #3
    Grand Master +DI-Dachi is offline
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    Re: Falling

    v1 defo is the better one, but take out the blue like line thing on her face.... text even works imo... ;) so good job and kiu

    only thing, add some more colours if possible... seems a little monotone and burn the sides maybe to create a little better dept... ;)

  4. #4
    Grand Master Venereal is offline
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    Re: Falling

    Can you do a version where the opacity is in between the 2? Because v1 looks to bright and v2 is just nasty.

  5. #5
    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: Falling

    v1 is better,
    v2 is a bit to bright,
    looks awkward,



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