~Fencing

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    ~Fencing

    v1


    v2 (changed the text cause i hated v1's text.)




    i know its simple, dont need to tell me
    i know theres areas with nothing in them, you dont need to tell me

    my first ever use of the pen tool... ever...


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    Member i8garfield is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    Pen tool is nice. If you wanted it plain then you could have added maybe just a tad of effects. And the text on the second one doesn't make sense.

    Good job overall.

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    Grand Master scrat55 is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    text is nice, needs more effect and colors, a light source and more depth, oversized too?

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    Sorcerer Supreme Spycky is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    no effects. good pen tooling tough :D gotta learn how to do that xD

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    thanks. lul it was my first ever attempt at pen tool (and on my laptop's trackpad) so yeah im happy with it.

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    Visit my hompage Vi3tb0i2ty is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    the bg is plain

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    I'll add a v3 tonight when im home (posting from my phone)

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    Grand Master Zen is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    anyone got any ideas on how i can liven up the background a bit?

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    If its a stock try and smudge it or place a nice c4d around the image to take up some space

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
    Maybe add a light source?

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    bensonhu Skycut is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    Seen that render before, could use some work/effort though.

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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    Quote Originally Posted by keane6 View Post
    a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
    Maybe add a light source?
    Not at all
    If your good enough
    and a light source isnt going to take up a whole background

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    Banned KyleEnos is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    Don't like the 2nd one. I'm picky; I don't like the text "Freedom" when the image whos someone in a pretty restraint, claustrophobic place.

    + I don't really like the render. The texture of the headgear seems to clash with the clothing.

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    Re: ~Fencing

    Quote Originally Posted by keane6 View Post
    a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
    Maybe add a light source?
    yes, im worried it would ruin the pen, il try a c4d though.

    Quote Originally Posted by Skycut View Post
    Seen that render before, could use some work/effort though.
    some work/effort? be specific, if you say i didnt put effort, you do one better. il provide the stock if you like.

    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    Not at all
    If your good enough
    and a light source isnt going to take up a whole background
    il try.
    Quote Originally Posted by KyleEnos View Post
    Don't like the 2nd one. I'm picky; I don't like the text "Freedom" when the image whos someone in a pretty restraint, claustrophobic place.

    + I don't really like the render. The texture of the headgear seems to clash with the clothing.
    how exactly is he in a clostrphobic place? hes outside.... spinning aroud... being free....

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: ~Fencing

    i think by the means that he is restricted to that helmet/uniform/etc.
    Be careful if you do add in a c4d :O



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