First attempt in a While.

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    Getting into Graphics Mages4ever is offline
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    First attempt in a While.

    I tried a new style.
    New render, new technique.



    Not sure if this is great but, just rate it 1-10 =D.
    Thanks!


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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    nice try, but more tuts needed. >o<
    colors could be better blended, needs flow, needs depth, and give it some better effects.
    3.5/10

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    Sure.
    I'll work on that next time.
    I need better renders too.
    This was the first time I've ever made a sig like this so yea.
    Anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mages4ever View Post
    Sure.
    I'll work on that next time.
    I need better renders too.
    This was the first time I've ever made a sig like this so yea.
    Anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism.
    haha, nice double post lagger >o< and you're welcome for the criticism.
    lol, anyways, yea, the text sort of goes okay, but if you need good renders,
    i prefer finding anime renders since a lot of em are everyone's favorites.
    and yea, just go to www.planetrenders.net and search for a good render. ^^

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    I got it from Plant Renders.

    The only problem is that I don;t really know how to make these things work.
    I follow tutorials and learn from them, but when I make my own versions of mixed tutorials (Of the same style) they look weird.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mages4ever View Post
    I got it from Plant Renders.

    The only problem is that I don;t really know how to make these things work.
    I follow tutorials and learn from them, but when I make my own versions of mixed tutorials (Of the same style) they look weird.
    hmmmm, then i prefer, learning from it,
    like why not try just 1 of the tuts from Tutorial section, and then after read over it and learn from it.
    and then get to know all your tools, it'll probably take less than 1 week or 1 week, it depends.
    try this.
    http://forum.ragezone.com/f145/tutorial-suzaku-519987/

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    *You gave me a tut?*
    *Where?*

    Oh Okay.
    Thanks.

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    6/10

    Try to blend in the stock with the BG.

    but other than that it is looking good.

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    Thanks.
    Well, I gotta do some work on Photoshop then.
    Second attempt coming soon.
    Maybe.

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    it look nice, but you should of try to make it belnd in with the background.

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    I gotte say, take out that horrid border and text, blend in the render, use better colours and such, check my tut or Grasna's they could help you out quite a bit if you read them or look at them even wel enough... ;) they are simple tuts, or wel mine is most part at least... so they could work for you... but you need to learn to create dept and use renders and/or other stuff better... sorry if I am harsh though... just trying to help, know what its like being a beginner, check my thing posted by kunii to see where I started at to see that anyone can make it with enough practice... ;) nice try though, kiu

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    Yea, the render is horrible.
    Okay.
    Well this is all helpful.
    I will get better.
    I swear.
    (I hope)

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    i actually like it alot,

    just learn some smudging and use a black border and ull be 1 step higher to being a great artist

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    Re: First attempt in a While.

    This is what I know about smudging.
    Only smudge in one direction.



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