First Sig, and others [UPDATED]

[keane6]

Yeah hey guys i decided to go full frontal into PS without any knowledge :D
i plan to learn, just seeing what you guys think.



I mostly used filters >.>
could you rate it for me and tell me what i can do to improve it.
thanks in advance :D
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Ok guys read a few tuts and made another image.
the C4Ds hardly match but it was more of my test using masks and combining different images
Again tell me what you think! :D


V2


Thanks guys again for your encouragement :D

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Heres a Sig that was the simplest one i have created

:D
Personally i think it looks the best..
which is cool i guess :D

[MentaL]

[Laced]

Um, well first off when you make a sig, make the render visible :P

Second, The effects you used stand out like a sore thumb and cover the render.

The lens flare you shouldn't have used.

And the text could be ALOT better.

Overall it wasn't that great for a first sig even without knowledge of anything on PS.

I suggest looking a TuT next time.

And try not making the render unnoticeable, the render is pretty much the main focal in your sig.

[keane6]

Haha thanks for that, and yeah i plan on looking at a few tuts :D

[LilWayneFTW]

I can't see any words there,both look kinda blurry.
But other then that,it looks cool.

[Joser]

I can't see any words there,both look kinda blurry.
But other then that,it looks cool.

its okay for a first

[i8garfield]

Too many effects, text isn't good, and can't see render. Ask a fellow graphic member for help.

Nice try.

[Click Here]

Eh, this is kinda bad..
Well for your first it isn't too bad.
You may want to make the render visible.
Also, I would get rid of the Lens Flare.
Overall it's a 3/10.

Also, the text could be a bettr quality and make sure it matches with other colors in the sig.

[Clysse]

i cant even see the render,

or read the text,

its a bit below average for a first one,

but there is room for improvement

[keane6]

Thanks guys for your comments

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

Um, well first off when you make a sig, make the render visible :P

Second, The effects you used stand out like a sore thumb and cover the render.

The lens flare you shouldn't have used.

And the text could be ALOT better.

Overall it wasn't that great for a first sig even without knowledge of anything on PS.

I suggest looking a TuT next time.

And try not making the render unnoticeable, the render is pretty much the main focal in your sig.

exactly Wat he said but here is a tut :
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/f/20..._gdavid010.jpg

[keane6]

Added second Sig, again it was just a test but after reading a tut or two. :D

[dark12345]

Render sticks out too much in the new one .
Too much going on aswell , nice attempt - keep practicing :)
follow a few effect tutorials and try implementing them , should make your work better and before you know it you'll be able to add all kinds of things when your thinking of an idea.

[Helien]

First of all , Your Text..Next time you could use some arial font text , black in colour. Or something that is Distribution to your siggy.
Second , Render. try make you render visible like Laced said.

Well Anyway.. Your 2nd siggy is much more better than ur first one. Good Job for the improving.
1st = 2/10
2nd = 4/10

- Helien

[keane6]

Thanks Helien, i appreciate your advice.
Uploaded V2 of the siggy. Made it a it brighter and changed the text :D

[i8garfield]

Relax on the C4D's. And be a little more plain.

Nice try.

[alexdesire]

Relax on the C4D's. And be a little more plain.

Nice try.

Agreed your realying to much on c4ds try and learn plcemnt and flow before trying c4ds.

[Spycky]

based on c4d, all i see is that :/
try using more effects and learning how to create FLOW...
3/10 for your efforts.