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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    First Sig, and others [UPDATED]

    Yeah hey guys i decided to go full frontal into PS without any knowledge :D
    i plan to learn, just seeing what you guys think.



    I mostly used filters >.>
    could you rate it for me and tell me what i can do to improve it.
    thanks in advance :D
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    Ok guys read a few tuts and made another image.
    the C4Ds hardly match but it was more of my test using masks and combining different images
    Again tell me what you think! :D


    V2


    Thanks guys again for your encouragement :D

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    Heres a Sig that was the simplest one i have created

    :D
    Personally i think it looks the best..
    which is cool i guess :D
    Last edited by keane6; 03-11-08 at 12:19 PM.


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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Um, well first off when you make a sig, make the render visible :P

    Second, The effects you used stand out like a sore thumb and cover the render.

    The lens flare you shouldn't have used.

    And the text could be ALOT better.

    Overall it wasn't that great for a first sig even without knowledge of anything on PS.

    I suggest looking a TuT next time.

    And try not making the render unnoticeable, the render is pretty much the main focal in your sig.

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Haha thanks for that, and yeah i plan on looking at a few tuts :D

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    Grand Master LilWayneFTW is offline
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    Re: First sig

    I can't see any words there,both look kinda blurry.
    But other then that,it looks cool.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LilWayneFTW View Post
    I can't see any words there,both look kinda blurry.
    But other then that,it looks cool.
    its okay for a first

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    Member i8garfield is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Too many effects, text isn't good, and can't see render. Ask a fellow graphic member for help.

    Nice try.

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    Re: First sig

    Eh, this is kinda bad..
    Well for your first it isn't too bad.
    You may want to make the render visible.
    Also, I would get rid of the Lens Flare.
    Overall it's a 3/10.

    Also, the text could be a bettr quality and make sure it matches with other colors in the sig.

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    Senior Clysse is offline
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    Re: First sig

    i cant even see the render,

    or read the text,

    its a bit below average for a first one,

    but there is room for improvement

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Thanks guys for your comments

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    Visit my hompage Vi3tb0i2ty is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Quote Originally Posted by Laced View Post
    Um, well first off when you make a sig, make the render visible :P

    Second, The effects you used stand out like a sore thumb and cover the render.

    The lens flare you shouldn't have used.

    And the text could be ALOT better.

    Overall it wasn't that great for a first sig even without knowledge of anything on PS.

    I suggest looking a TuT next time.

    And try not making the render unnoticeable, the render is pretty much the main focal in your sig.
    exactly Wat he said but here is a tut :
    http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/f/20..._gdavid010.jpg

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Added second Sig, again it was just a test but after reading a tut or two. :D

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    Re: First sig

    Render sticks out too much in the new one .
    Too much going on aswell , nice attempt - keep practicing :)
    follow a few effect tutorials and try implementing them , should make your work better and before you know it you'll be able to add all kinds of things when your thinking of an idea.

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    Re: First sig

    First of all , Your Text..Next time you could use some arial font text , black in colour. Or something that is Distribution to your siggy.
    Second , Render. try make you render visible like Laced said.

    Well Anyway.. Your 2nd siggy is much more better than ur first one. Good Job for the improving.
    1st = 2/10
    2nd = 4/10

    - Helien

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: First sig

    Thanks Helien, i appreciate your advice.
    Uploaded V2 of the siggy. Made it a it brighter and changed the text :D

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    Re: First Sig, and others [UPDATED]

    Relax on the C4D's. And be a little more plain.

    Nice try.

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    Re: First Sig, and others [UPDATED]

    Quote Originally Posted by i8garfield View Post
    Relax on the C4D's. And be a little more plain.

    Nice try.
    Agreed your realying to much on c4ds try and learn plcemnt and flow before trying c4ds.

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    Sorcerer Supreme Spycky is offline
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    Re: First Sig, and others [UPDATED]

    based on c4d, all i see is that :/
    try using more effects and learning how to create FLOW...
    3/10 for your efforts.



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