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Newbie
first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
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V2
Last edited by Longitude; 18-02-11 at 04:05 PM.
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Grand Master
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
Would look better with border. I do have to say that render doesn't blend in ;/ Weird pixilated background. Right half of the signature, doesn't look to bad, but the other half, needs a big improvement.
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Newbie
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
It has a very subtle border actually if u look on the right side
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Elite Member
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
Some parts of the background is pixelated, the red c4d things don't really blend well.
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Sorcerer Supreme
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
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Banned
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
Messy piece of work with almost no logic/sense to it at all.
It looks a lot as though you took two stocks and pasted one on top of the other.
Colour choices are a little off-contrast.
And 404 is right, it needs border.
If you're not sure what a border is...google.
If what you meant by a 'subtle' border is that thin piece of overlay...
...its so invisible, its no longer defined as a border.
I'm serious, its hardly visible at first. It almost seems to be part of the background.
Last edited by AkaInRed; 18-02-11 at 09:16 AM.
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Grand Master
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
I know nothing about Photoshop, so to me that looks alright...
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Grand Master
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
i think it would be better if the colours were different?
im not too sure, i think its one of those peice i dont like, not because its terrible, just because of my taste.
try changing the colours and getting rid of that random thing on the right.
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Newbie
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
ok i took all of your guys'advice
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hey
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
colors don't blend, and the brushes are a pain in the eye.
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Elite Member
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
The 2nd one isn't any better IMO. It is too messy.
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Banned
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
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Banned
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!
What stretched render?
Anyways, the 2nd one doesn't help very much.
RYGB filter + the strange white bits make it look very...off.
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Banned
Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!