first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

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  1. #1
    Newbie Longitude is offline
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    first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

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    Grand Master 404 is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    Would look better with border. I do have to say that render doesn't blend in ;/ Weird pixilated background. Right half of the signature, doesn't look to bad, but the other half, needs a big improvement.

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    Newbie Longitude is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    It has a very subtle border actually if u look on the right side

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    Elite Member Torched is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    Some parts of the background is pixelated, the red c4d things don't really blend well.

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    Sorcerer Supreme Pews is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    I like it.

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    Banned AkaInRed is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    Messy piece of work with almost no logic/sense to it at all.
    It looks a lot as though you took two stocks and pasted one on top of the other.

    Colour choices are a little off-contrast.

    And 404 is right, it needs border.
    If you're not sure what a border is...google.

    If what you meant by a 'subtle' border is that thin piece of overlay...
    ...its so invisible, its no longer defined as a border.
    I'm serious, its hardly visible at first. It almost seems to be part of the background.
    Last edited by AkaInRed; 18-02-11 at 09:16 AM.

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    Grand Master Sparrow is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    I know nothing about Photoshop, so to me that looks alright...

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    Grand Master ChewBecca is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    i think it would be better if the colours were different?
    im not too sure, i think its one of those peice i dont like, not because its terrible, just because of my taste.

    try changing the colours and getting rid of that random thing on the right.

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    Newbie Longitude is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    ok i took all of your guys'advice

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    hey Irahnik is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    colors don't blend, and the brushes are a pain in the eye.

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    Elite Member Torched is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    The 2nd one isn't any better IMO. It is too messy.

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    Banned Dylan3000 is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    Stretched render=no-no

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    Banned AkaInRed is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    What stretched render?


    Anyways, the 2nd one doesn't help very much.
    RYGB filter + the strange white bits make it look very...off.

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    Banned Dylan3000 is offline
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    Re: first sig in a while Constructive criticism appreciated!

    Looks stretched to me.



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