Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

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    Canadian Mike is offline
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    Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Well, I made a Flawless signature a while back. It was all green, and the C4D was kinda covering the render. So I decided to fix it up.

    Comments/opinions?

    v2:


    v1:


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    Grand Master ChewBecca is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    aye its better
    bit i dont like the sharpness of the edges of her.

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    Canadian Mike is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    I'll try to smudge it a little, in a few minutes. Also, that bubble in the top left corner, I'll maybe smudge that down a bit, the line right around it looks a little sharpened/distorted.

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    Grand Master ChewBecca is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    all you gotta do is duplicate the layer, gassiuan blur one, and erase the areas you dont want bluured on the layer your blurred

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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Well lightly smudging it would work too.

    I don't have the .PSD haha. Stupid me, I only saved the .PSD of v1, so I have to redo all those changes. So smudging is my only option.

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    Grand Master Manual is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    She looks sick. Don't keep em that way. D; (too green)

    Change the text, go SIMPLE!

    C'mon Mike. ;D

    By the way, downsize the render so more of the body shows. Like I said to Laced... floating head syndrome is not cool.

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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    In V1, it's monotone, but in V.2 you fixed that... sorta. The colors in V.e2are better then V.1, but they still need to be blended better, maybye add a few gradiant maps, and photo filter or 2 to fix that up.

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    Canadian Mike is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Add photo filters? That's what I did in v1. Had a bunch of gradiants and photo filters.

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    Grand Master Manual is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Share render Mike please.

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    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    I think I still like v1 a little better,
    Nice job though

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    Canadian Mike is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Quote Originally Posted by Manual View Post
    Share render Mike please.
    It's from Draven Render pack. I'll make a release of them soon. Hundreds of good quality renders.

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    Grand Master ushpen is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Honestly i don't like this, looks boring and maybe you can fix those c4d around her hair, and learn to use default fonts. That would look nicer.

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    Elite Member xFateFaith is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Well..v2 Does Look Better..
    But, Why Does That Render Is Green? O.o
    Keep It Going!

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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    v2 is better
    v1 is just plain plain plain
    XD

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    Grand Master Grasna is offline
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    Re: Flawless Green [Udpated, no longer all green!]

    Render doesn't blend in with the signature at all. The green is making her look like that chick from the ring except she looks sick. the text could be way better as well. 3/10



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