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Sorcerer Supreme
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Grand Master
Re: Focus
Looks nice and simple. I like it.
Hm, 7/10, could work on text a bit.
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Sorcerer Supreme
Re: Focus
Bump?
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Grand Master
Re: Focus
Sameeeee Rendder! <3
Hmmm the Wire frame is always good to put into a Sig but its just random in the top right corner thar ;O
The flow of the sig contradicts itself.
And the Light source (If it is a light source?) Is way too prominent in the signature .
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ex visor
Re: Focus
Text is bad and out of place.
I like the concept though.
7/10
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Sorcerer Supreme
Re: Focus
made a v2, tried to blend the render in more and fix the text 
V2:
also the borders white (again xD)
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Newbie
Re: Focus
i think that the version 1 looks better
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Fuck You
Re: Focus
I like the 1st one cause you can see the text more
and its more colored