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  1. #1
    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Focus

    Lately, i've been using the pen tools in my latest tags('cause i just found out how to use it a few days back =O), so i decided to try making one without any brushes or using the pen tool



    Whaddaya think?

    V2:
    Last edited by Atron; 20-11-08 at 10:01 PM.


  2. #2
    Grand Master faytman is offline
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    Re: Focus

    Looks nice and simple. I like it.
    Hm, 7/10, could work on text a bit.

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Re: Focus

    Bump?

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    Grand Master keane6 is offline
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    Re: Focus

    Sameeeee Rendder! <3
    Hmmm the Wire frame is always good to put into a Sig but its just random in the top right corner thar ;O
    The flow of the sig contradicts itself.
    And the Light source (If it is a light source?) Is way too prominent in the signature .

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    ex visor Aaron is offline
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    Re: Focus

    Text is bad and out of place.

    I like the concept though.

    7/10

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    Sorcerer Supreme Atron is offline
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    Re: Focus

    made a v2, tried to blend the render in more and fix the text

    V2:

    also the borders white (again xD)

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    Newbie Railway is offline
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    Re: Focus

    i think that the version 1 looks better

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    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: Focus

    I like the 1st one cause you can see the text more
    and its more colored



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