Framework

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  1. #1
    Grand Master ♠ Ryeeye ♠ is offline
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    Framework

    I'm ready for the critics!

    :d.

    I give myself a 2.5/10.

    #2:


    #3


  2. #2
    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: Framework

    IMO Overall, ugly D:
    The background is tooo blurry.
    The render doesn't fit with the colors.
    And the Text doesn't fit, either.
    2/10

  3. #3
    Grand Master faytman is offline
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    Re: Framework

    Quote Originally Posted by HydroBenZ View Post
    IMO Overall, ugly D:
    The background is tooo blurry.
    The render doesn't fit with the colors.
    And the Text doesn't fit, either.
    2/10
    I agree

  4. #4
    Senior Clysse is offline
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    Re: Framework

    dont call something "ugly" because it doesnt fit your taste,
    some ways u can improve this is to stick with on flow direction for your background, dont smudge the render that much into it, blend the text a bit better, dont use that font

    keep practicing and ull get better

  5. #5
    Grand Master ♠ Ryeeye ♠ is offline
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    Re: Framework

    Why thank you good sirs, you gave me a VERY good rating!
    I was expecting a -10/10 and a good 'ol gtfo :D
    Heres #2 you ducks you:


    I give this one a 1.5/10.

    Edit: Clysse had to type faster than me :/

    P.S This was made in GIMP :p

    Edit2: Eh

    This one gets a 3/10 because it actually shows the flare >_>

  6. #6
    Grand Master alexdesire is offline
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    Re: Framework

    Looks alright imo :/

    Work on flow and lighting also the render/stock need to stand out more.

  7. #7
    Elite Member Sinny~ is offline
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    Re: Framework

    all i see wrong is your render choice and text...
    Good job m8

  8. #8
    5UP3Rcr3vv Sundays is offline
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    Re: Framework

    Looks Like you just did anything O_o I hate the render and the text! But its alright i gib j00 a 2.6/10!

    Teehee



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