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    Elite Member .BloodShed. is offline
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    General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    V1:


    V2:


    V3:


    Please comment and critisize.
    Last edited by .BloodShed.; 23-10-08 at 03:22 AM.


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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Not that great.

    The left is really plain, and the render is too small.

    And the text is in two different places so it takes attention away from the render.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by laced View Post
    not that great.

    The left is really plain, and the render is too small.

    And the text is in two different places so it takes attention away from the render.
    +10

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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by xriss View Post
    +10
    Ok?

    Is that supposed to make me mad or something?

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    It means I agree with your post -_-

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    V2 looks worse, it's better with the white/grey BG behind the render.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Its really bad man, sorry i don't like this one. Left side is empty, bg is bad, render is too little, text is bad.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Wat ushpen said

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    the bg behind render is just a c4d on overlay. and thanks for cc ill try again later

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    I got a Qeustion: My Signature sucks or not? :P

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by Speedthief View Post
    I got a Qeustion: My Signature sucks or not? :P
    Please stay on topic.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Huge ass empty space on the left. Too much text. The focal/power point is good but you just gotta fill the empty space :)

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    hmm, i have to say not the worse i have seen, i agree with laced, the text is everywhere, there is also WAY too mutch space. good try tough.
    3/10 for effort.
    ps: v1 with border is the best :)

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by Speedthief View Post
    I got a Qeustion: My Signature sucks or not? :P
    Get your tag rated at the "Rate the avatar and signature above you" topic, and stay to the topic.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by ushpen View Post
    Its really bad man, sorry i don't like this one. Left side is empty, bg is bad, render is too little, text is bad.
    Right on
    Totally agree :/

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    Elite Member .BloodShed. is offline
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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    any suggestions to do with empty space? i tried c4d but it was ugly

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    v1 with border,

    pretty plain and simple effects,

    but good job on this

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Quote Originally Posted by Clysse View Post
    v1 with border,

    pretty plain and simple effects,

    but good job on this
    Your smoking crack right? :]

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Font- Execellent, But the render, Horrible cutting job, and the backround dosent really flow with the render. :S

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    Re: General Grievous Signature,

    Added V3. please c&c

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    Re: General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    Its better then before but its still VERY Plain i suggest you try a new one and make a new background not with clouds this time :P
    chose carefully one what you make a signature with.

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    Re: General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    i suggest you also use a tut

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    Re: General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    Its better then before but its still VERY Plain i suggest you try and new one and make a new background not with clouds this time :P
    chose carefully one what you make a signature with.

    lol i didnt use clowds. i put c4d then put a white bg behind it. then put on color dodge, and then made a brishung layer with grunge brush.

    so try again withdiff bg and rendeR?

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    Re: General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    Quote Originally Posted by .BloodShed. View Post
    lol i didnt use clowds. i put c4d then put a white bg behind it. then put on color dodge, and then made a brishung layer with grunge brush.

    so try again withdiff bg and rendeR?
    I suppose, and try and look up a beginner TuT.
    They help alot ^_^.
    Theres quite a few on Rz or look on google.
    Good luck :P

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    Re: General Grievous Signature, [ADDED V3!!]

    V3 looks alot better.



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