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  1. #1
    Elite Member Harbour is offline
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    grinch

    oh how we love the grinch!



    C&C?


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    Senior Clysse is offline
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    Re: grinch

    brushing and background dont blend the render

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    Grand Master faytman is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Render really stands out....

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    Grand Master xriss is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Hm.. I don't like the BG, and the focal isn't blended at all. Font could be better.

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    Elite Member Harbour is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Quote Originally Posted by Clysse View Post
    brushing and background dont blend the render
    I don't remember using any brushing except the eraser tool.

    Quote Originally Posted by faytman View Post
    Render really stands out....
    Is that a good thing?

    Quote Originally Posted by xriss View Post
    Hm.. I don't like the BG, and the focal isn't blended at all. Font could be better.
    Whats wrong with the background?
    If your ganna critize, do it in style.

    And my text always sucks.

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    Grand Master faytman is offline
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    Re: grinch

    No, unless your trying to do that, usually ppl try to blend the render in with the background...

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    Grand Master xriss is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Quote Originally Posted by Harbour View Post
    I don't remember using any brushing except the eraser tool.



    Is that a good thing?



    Whats wrong with the background?
    If your ganna critize, do it in style.

    And my text always sucks.
    So you want critique, eh? Ok you'll get it. The tag is missing lightning and as said the focal ain't blended at all. The font is bad, use an other style. The upper boarder is bigger than the "down" one. The BG effect(s) is just red with some c4d/filter effect on hard light or something like that. I don't really like the compo of the focal and the cyan c4d's = messy placed.

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    Elite Member Harbour is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Quote Originally Posted by xriss View Post
    So you want critique, eh? Ok you'll get it. The tag is missing lightning and as said the focal ain't blended at all. The font is bad, use an other style. The upper boarder is bigger than the "down" one. The BG effect(s) is just red with some c4d/filter effect on hard light or something like that. I don't really like the compo of the focal and the cyan c4d's = messy placed.
    Now if you did that in every post you did, you'd actually be liked.
    oh any, i wanted the border like that, i seen it on someone elses so i did it on mine.
    top right, theres lighing, and the background was a pattern ^^

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    Sorcerer Supreme Spycky is offline
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    Re: grinch

    the background is just like, too mutch going on.
    and the render sticks out like a soldjier wearing red saying ''KILL ME''(you get the point)
    also the text. i can barely see it :S
    4/10

    good luck next time :P
    PS: my 200th post YAY! xD

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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: grinch

    Quote Originally Posted by Clysse View Post
    brushing and background dont blend the render
    VERY true.

    And the effects you used are blended in very badly.

    And the text blends in with the background, that could use some work.

    And as for the render, it sticks out like a sore thumb, you should try using matching colors in a sig and blend the render in.



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