[Gurb]Been too long

[iamgurb]

I know its not good, you're prob like wtf has this guy made but oh well

[MentaL]

[404]

Sorri kind sir, not your best work.

- Text, blue with outline? really? Sorry, no.. just no..
- Overlayed c4d's dont blend too good here.
- Also, a bit too much blur.. Slow down cowboy..


Sorry, not a fan of it..

[Aaron]

My thoughts about this tag is kind of similar.
I don't think the C4D sit well with this tag -- try another approach. I think doing vectors, or abstract-type methods would be a better approach, but that's just my opinion.

Furthermore, the text really doesn't look good. I always try and stay simple with the text, unless you really are good with fancying it, and making it look good!

[JessB75]

@Error 404 - Haha Lmao!,


- But yeah that's the first thing i notice too "Blue text"

[nickypunk001]

as the error 404 said,

the text with outline not good for me too,
and the C4D Effect in the left side is not blend in the render i think?
but i like the right side the red one looks some aura in his hand..

[andreeyps2]

Text 4/10
Background + Effects 7/10

Continue and you will get better and better

[Bergthor]

Why did you post it if you knew it was bad?

[iamgurb]

Because one improves with constructive comments.

[George SS]

Use smudge my friend , that is every GFX "artists" secret. Also learn which colour goes with what , and you can become a GFX god in no time. Play around with blending , Overlay , Hard Light , Vivid Light , Screen , are all useful in certain situations. Also on text always apply some blend mode , otherwise it looks like its dropped there ... not part of the image.

[Tiretism]

When using smudge tool, it's fairly hard to produce something that's actually appealing to the eye, most people who start off with a smudge tool don't take depth into consideration which makes a tag look very flat and not realistic at all.

Onto the piece;
The compo here killed the tag, the focal position doesn't help at all. Drop the text, and work a little more on focal effects.
Work on blending everything together. And, allot of adjc layers to help with the colors and blending.
Don't over-blur your tags, I've seen you do that with all your tags, and it usually makes your work look flat.
Keep practicing, mate.