had another go

[Avenged]

[MentaL]

[InTrO]

render looks poor :P

[Avenged]

i know but im getting there

[Flawz]

remove the dropshadow or outerglow

[Mornn]

Render needs to be blended. 5/10

[Jhewt]

4/10 black blow in the render? :P, try to delete it xD

[1Word]

7/10 ... its not that bad :P

[Cernasite]

Looks rather poor. 3/10. The black edges on the dragon really doesn't appeal to me. =/ Nor does the text. *Not fond of outlines* ><