Hollow Ichigo

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  1. #1
    Elite Member xAJW is offline
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    Hollow Ichigo



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    I like the one in my signature more. Constructive criticisms welcomed.
    Last edited by xAJW; 01-02-11 at 11:30 AM.


  2. #2
    Sorcerer Supreme Thranism is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    Try not to use the stripe pattern overlay over the renders.

  3. #3
    Elite Member xAJW is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    Removed the pattern for the render.

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    Atleast Die Trying... Sunny is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    i like it but although i hate the dark scene. I would like it more if the flames or w/e u call it around him were more brighter.

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    Grand Master 404 is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    You got pretty mad style, but your backgrounds suck..

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    Elite Member xAJW is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    @Error 404
    Any suggestions on what kind of background should i use?

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    Member lumpydonuts is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    It looks better imo, still dont like the scanline.

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    Grand Master 404 is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    If you know how to/like smudging, try smudging c4d on the background? Maybe also adding a light source?

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    Grand Master Grasna is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    Honestly it looks great except for the stripes. They don't match the flow of the signature and are setting it offbalance. Remove those and it's fine :).

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    Elite Member Torched is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    You could do more with the background. Like removing those lines and doing some smudging.

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    Infraction Banned Dylanw/<3 is offline
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    Re: Hollow Ichigo

    Looks nice man, excluding the stripes.



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