If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Here are a few different things I made;
    1)
    With Eye
    2)
    Without Eye
    3)
    With a pokemon figure
    4)
    Blue Version
    5)
    Possibly a signature

    Bare in mind that I'm still fairly new to graphics, so criticism
    is the best thing for me at the moment.

    Rates?
    Last edited by VerbOtaku; 31-03-12 at 02:01 PM.


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    Sorcerer Supreme Titch is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Love them :P These are sexy

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    GFX Maniac Creeps is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    2nd one is the best ^^
    If the last one was all blue it would be much better ^^
    gj

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Okay thanks, I'll upload a all blue one, gis 2 secs:)

    better?
    Last edited by VerbOtaku; 31-03-12 at 02:00 PM.

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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    I like the 2nd one.
    and the 3rd one is weird..

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Thanks for feedback, :)

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    Preparing Riizq is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    The text on #5 are really small.

    Your work is good, keep it up aaron.

    And btw what is the pokemon that you used?

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    GFX Maniac Creeps is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Quote Originally Posted by VerbOtaku View Post
    Okay thanks, I'll upload a all blue one, gis 2 secs:)

    better?
    much better ^^ try to put a similar pokemon or even the same (inverted) on the left

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Done:

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    GFX Maniac Creeps is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    that's what i meant ^^ really cool

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Thanks, remember like and rep please;) <3

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    Sorcerer Supreme joellol is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    2nd one looks nice and clean to me imo

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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    5 is the best. The eye doesnt really sit well. Its just awkwardly placed imo, and doesnt go well with the colours. As the colour of the eye has been desaturated, this also makes it a little wierd.

    The text along the bottom of all of them are too much. The 'verb' is fine, it is a name and one word, but that style of text doesnt work well with a full sentance. Try using a more simple font for the bottom text.

    With all things in concideration, you have done really well, and just make sure that you take all feedback on board! It will help you improve! Make sure you keep making things, and post them up! We all love seeing new talent.

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    Sorcerer Supreme VerbOtaku is offline
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    Re: If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

    Wow, thank you for that feedback everyone, I shall take everything on bored like chewbecca said and hopefully I will improve! I'll try create something tomorrow night for you all: suggestions?
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