If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

[VerbOtaku]

If the eyes had no tears, the soul would have no rainbow

Here are a few different things I made;
1)

With Eye

2)

Without Eye

3)

With a pokemon figure

4)

Blue Version

5)

Possibly a signature

Bare in mind that I'm still fairly new to graphics, so criticism
is the best thing for me at the moment.

Rates?

[MentaL]

[Titch]

Love them :P These are sexy

[Creeps]

2nd one is the best ^^
If the last one was all blue it would be much better ^^
gj

[VerbOtaku]

Okay thanks, I'll upload a all blue one, gis 2 secs:)

better?

[FineFair]

I like the 2nd one.
and the 3rd one is weird..

[VerbOtaku]

Thanks for feedback, :)

[Riizq]

The text on #5 are really small.

Your work is good, keep it up aaron.

And btw what is the pokemon that you used?

[Creeps]

Okay thanks, I'll upload a all blue one, gis 2 secs:)

better?

much better ^^ try to put a similar pokemon or even the same (inverted) on the left

[VerbOtaku]

Done:

[Creeps]

that's what i meant ^^ really cool

[VerbOtaku]

Thanks, remember like and rep please;) <3

[joellol]

2nd one looks nice and clean to me imo

[ChewBecca]

5 is the best. The eye doesnt really sit well. Its just awkwardly placed imo, and doesnt go well with the colours. As the colour of the eye has been desaturated, this also makes it a little wierd.

The text along the bottom of all of them are too much. The 'verb' is fine, it is a name and one word, but that style of text doesnt work well with a full sentance. Try using a more simple font for the bottom text.

With all things in concideration, you have done really well, and just make sure that you take all feedback on board! It will help you improve! Make sure you keep making things, and post them up! We all love seeing new talent.

[VerbOtaku]

Wow, thank you for that feedback everyone, I shall take everything on bored like chewbecca said and hopefully I will improve! I'll try create something tomorrow night for you all: suggestions?
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