
Originally Posted by
Grasna
Alright here it goes. Sig has a bit of flow so thats a good thing. The text and the render are competing for the focal point so try to somehow integrate both the render and the text so that the render stands out more then the text. You also have them kinda spaced and at the same height, i would suggest lowering the text to the bottom where her shoulder is so the text has the same flow as the render if you know what i mean. Second, it has a bit of a light source crisis considering the light on the render is contrasting because the light is at the bottom with all the sparklie stuff. Other then that, looks good. :)