Listen.

[Original_]

I used a tutorial. But i used everything they supplied (Stock, guide, c4ds).

[MentaL]

[CrownC]

PLEASE PLEASE remove those black things,

[Original_]

Lol. I also found them strange but I was just following the tutorial as much as I can.

[wounded]

While ur at removing the black things, remove that "border" off the sides, or at least make them both the same size.

[Original_]

I don't plan on changing it. This was just for fun because they supplied everything for me, I'm just showing the RZ community what I got. :3

[buzzfizz]

T.I. :D

Very nice, and what the... why is there black stuff on the sides o_O

[ChewBecca]

i think you should take out the edges, and move the black things out,
so they are more to the edges, and have more of the picture,
and then that may look better.

[buzzfizz]

Though, a better song for listen is by Talib Kweli - Listen!!!

[Alexx1516]

The center looks good.