Lollipop

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  1. #1
    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Lollipop


    C&C please.

    v2
    Last edited by IRockTheGimp; 22-12-07 at 09:36 PM.


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    Grand Master kip0130 is offline
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    Re: Future Hero

    Quote Originally Posted by IRockTheGimp View Post


    C&C please.
    6/10

    Make the render darker red. it stands out to much. aswell as remove the red mess coming off of his back.
    take that dark red crack out of the side of the sig.aswell as blend the Foreground effes with the render and the Background better. it looks "placed" there and it needs a border.

  3. #3
    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Re: Future Hero

    Quote Originally Posted by kip0130 View Post
    6/10

    Make the render darker red. it stands out to much. aswell as remove the red mess coming off of his back.
    take that dark red crack out of the side of the sig.aswell as blend the Foreground effes with the render and the Background better. it looks "placed" there and it needs a border.
    alright, i'll see what I can do.

    updated a new rotated one. any more comments?

  4. #4
    Member retrowedgie is offline
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    Re: Lollipop

    Nah, no border.
    Um, I liked the other one better, actually. Just one thing I don't really like is the wireframe thing, on the left. Also, the small effects around the lollipop seem blurry, try to fix that. Run a yellow/vanilla-ish and light red, almost hot pink, gradient on it...you don't have to though, I think it might look awesome :P
    I like this one, though :)

  5. #5
    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Re: Lollipop

    K thanks, updated one with minor changes. Smudged away the crack that kip was talking about. Can't do anything about the c4d's and wire frame since I have so many gradients and adjustments.

  6. #6
    Sorcerer Supreme admLoki is offline
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    Re: Lollipop

    7/10 for first one .

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    Grand Master Wiredex is offline
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    Re: Lollipop

    Get the v1 .
    I do not like v2 xD
    It looks very cute xD
    8/10 for it ehhes



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