Please criticise with areas i need to improve on and also what i did wrong
Please criticise with areas i need to improve on and also what i did wrong
Pretty much most of it. Take your own tips you give to others and use them to improve yourself.
* The focus point is not on Mario but the star
* "Speed" effect should fade out
* No comments on the inverted color
There is no motion effect, it is just the render: Planet Renders // Renders - Video/Console Game Renders/Super Mario Galaxy - Rainbow Mario
Well there's your problem. Incredibly bad render to work with.
Sorry, but it's horrible.
~Mick
Thanks for the intelligent comment Mick, read what the original post said:
Originally Posted by Rainwizzard
But smart people like you know how to read, right?
There is a way to correct people without sounding like a stuck-up arsehole.
And if you need a list of things wrong it would take a day to write, so here it is in short: Everything.
~Mick
the render might look good with other sigs but in this one its just bad, u putted too much things on top of each other in the right space and even though the render is rainbow u have aleast 2 main colour unlike ur were u threw in any colour u wanted
Haha, this render is fine to work with, you just gotta know how to use it.
The biggest problem is that it's maaaad over-contrasted and the effects are somewhat random and messy.
I kindah wanted it to be messy and random, kinda like mario is.
@Mick - Make the 'Huge List'. Amuse me.
Here is the new improved version:
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1...axycopyjj7.jpg
And the newest version:
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/8...axycopyjr1.jpg
Kinda over messy. I know what you were tryin to get but it went totally wrong. Keep the Mario on the top layers rather on back. Will help.
Version 4 is rather sexy in my opinion.
That's actually quite good. =P
~Mick
Thanks, sorry for flipping mick.
I actually put for time in on this one, so it does look a bit better.
