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Elite Member
:) new

:D
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Grand Master
Re: :) new
Too grey for my taste :) adn that green "explosion" doesnt fit in I think. But a nice try.
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Hello
Re: :) new
hm. i like it :) the green thing is maybe a bit too bright and big but i love it otherwise :O
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Grand Master
Re: :) new
Not bad, but is you are gona have any color, then you need it all to be in color. The Red thing and the green light just don't fit in.
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Hello
Re: :) new
aha, i think thats the point...
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SK CREATIONS
Re: :) new
Great Idea.
But Unlucky For The Out Come.
The Problem I See Is The Fact The Green Eye Effect OverPowers The Render.
There Is No Blending.
Try Usinjg Overlay As A Starter Then Using A Mixer Add Some Motion Blur Then Use Layer Mask The Reveal All Then Use A Green And Black gradient. This Will Help The Effect And Mean It Doesnt Over Power The Render.
Also The Red Arm Peice. To Me This Is A Mistake. This Makes 2 Focal Points And Causes The Looker No Real Start Point. Try To Use The Eye Effect As A Builder Having The Color Flow Down From grey From The Flow Of The Eye.
This Will Create A Render Flow And Will Mean You Can Add More Color With Out Creating Mulitpul Focal Points.
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Grand Master
Re: :) new
I really like the idea, but something bothers me about that green part. Looks just like hes head was chopped off in half. Other than that, I like it. Good Job.
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Grand Master
Re: :) new
Beautiful except for the text and the lil sprinkles on the left hand side. They are just a lil bit too sharp for the render. Smoothen a lil bit and it'll be perfect.