C&C?
C&C?
Last edited by silence1; 08-06-06 at 10:36 AM.
dont like the text but the bg is nice :)
whats so bad about that text?:S
nothing wrong with text imo i like it... everythings nice and the light (lens flare?) at the top adds a lil variation which is good. good job :thumb_yel
try a different font :POriginally Posted by silence1
I like the whole thing. :D
theres nothing wrong with the font and the rest is great
Better, i like the background!
Nice... but if u look at the render... that light at the top middle... mmm... i don think it goes there... over the render...
The font is not bad... maybe juss... boring.. (?)
NOTE: The bgr is awesome... Congratz for ur work :D
No lens flare, just a 100px soft brush :)
and ty
yea the light source was supposed to go over the render and wuts boring? any suggestions on how i can make it better?
anywayz thnx for comments every1 :)
mmm I don think so... You cant place a light source on the dark side right?... not over the render... coz the source light on the render is placed on the opposite side...
If u ask...
The light cant be over there (1)
Why?
Juss follow the lines.. n u´ll notice bout the light goes over the render from the left side(3), and that is why u got light on (4) and shadows on (2 and 5)
The source light on that sign goes tween the bgr n the render... not over... n if u talk bout art... nothing "it is supposed to be..." n if u talk bout comments... That´s my comment...
NOTE : Im not an artist... I´m juss tryin to improve making sigs...
NOTE 2 : Your fonts are boring... the most of the times...
NOTE 3 : Congratz for ur work... :D
hmmm i get what ur sayin but, what if the light source was to be placed BEHIND the render? like so:
would that be better?
Juss imo... light source goes on 3... if u place it where it is now.. the hair would give shadow to the face...
but it looks weird if i put a light source in the middle of the sig :/ and come to think of it, it looks better and makes more sense than 3 here:
cuz if u look at it, the light is hitting the bottom of her face and side of her arms, not on top...
Yeah!!! That´s what I mean!!! U r right... it looks cool n it´s a perfect source there...
(except for a lil cutted light on the neck... but that´s minor...) I think coz one light source is missing... ( on 3 or higher if u look paying attention )
Congratz... I like it a lot :D
NOTE: I love the bgr... ^^
Last edited by Mr-K; 07-06-06 at 10:21 PM.
bah u may be right but im happy with where it is :)
thnx for the help :)
Im not good... I
and ur good too man :) ty again
