Newest sign after 2 months

[GotRice10]

ya ok im newest sign after two month :P
rate plz and tell me how i can improve nd yes i kno kinda bright gonna change that

[MentaL]

[Rainwizzard]

Oops, sorry, i meant to... nvm but here is what i meant to say: Bad text, Choppy and cut out, too seethrough, 2 of the same guy looks off a bit other then that, not bad.

[GotRice10]

Improvements:

#1:

Shading in the whole things is messed. Text is TERRIBLE and it's too choppy and cut out. The duplicate person makes the picture loose its focus. The BG is way too sharp and diverts the attention too much.

#2:

Whet is it? Verry unclear with not mych color variation or anything really... Again text is bad and there is really no shading or effects. I really don't know what the signature really is. The lighting blurring and so on do not show it. The exclusion reallr is annoying, and doesn't add to the sig unless you add to it and make the exclusion into something.

can ya put that in easier to understand
nd its just sign :P