Ninja :)

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  1. #1
    Grand Master ushpen is offline
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    Ninja :)

    Smudge and smudge until i get this outcome. Left upper was a little bit undone though i got lazy to fix that. Anyway i need CnC.



    v2
    Here ya go guys, i made the text more visible, i work on blending but i'm not sure with it, resmudge everything, and added source light. But I'm not really sure with this, it seems like i messed it up.

    Last edited by ushpen; 23-10-08 at 01:49 AM.


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    Visit my hompage Vi3tb0i2ty is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    kinda dark and you cant really see text,

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    Grand Master Loxx is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    Bad blending

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    Grand Master xriss is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    I'm sorry, but this is one of your worst tags - you can do so much better!

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    Grand Master scrat55 is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    bad text, bad blending, and there is nothing more on the sig than that... but i love the main render! :D could u link it plz

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    Grand Master Grasna is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    Ushpen, the problem with renders that have little string thingies/weapons coming off is that you cant blend them into the signature and if you cant do that then the signature just looks like you smudged some Autumn leaves and pasted the render in. Thats another thing, the colors don't go with the signature :P. I see green, and red but not Autumn green and red. its more darkish. Make the bg dark green/red and itll fit in more.

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    Sorcerer Supreme Spycky is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    hmm.. ok 1st thing i noticed was the text abit out of place, try moving it to lighter area.
    also the render doesent blend very well, and fix the corner,
    7/10

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    (☞゚∀゚)☞ (。◕‿‿◕。) Σ(゚Д゚ Σ) Laced is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    The text, fix that please.

    And you need a light source.

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    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    looks alright,
    I dont like smudges,
    look kinda awkward

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    Grand Master ushpen is offline
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    Re: Ninja :)

    V2 is now up

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