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    Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    I made these 2 new tags with new resources I got them from some semi and inters, so I cant share my resources of these, sorry, hope they are good though, took me quite some time to make these.... although not sure if they are better then my previous works, cuzz they are somewhat different... but comments appreciated... :D

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    DMC Dante render tag:


    c&c pl0xxors... ;)


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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    On the first the render Looks awkwardly placed, braking the rule of thirds on this one wasn't a good idea :/
    The colors looks good maybe darken the bright green a dat. Depth is lacking a little blur some of the foreground.

    The second looks really odd the lighting is very bad and its sets the depth and colors off balance.

    Nowhere near perfection but good tags none the less.

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    lol@ those comments... I do think they are better then my older works... you just cant see the skills I gues, ask Mibu what I mean... ;) and the placement is good, nothing wrong with it... I always tended to somewhat center the render/focal, and tryin to get away from that, cuzz people said stuff about that, and with that I mean inters and higher... they only said to change my light part and clean them up... and that compo could be a little less centered... but oh wel, gues its taste difference.... I dont know what is wrong with the light or anything, I dont think they have errors... xD wel this is a quote from the people on WM studio, that know a bit more about graphix, on what they said... ;)

    Top is great IMO =]

    bottom the lgihting is weird.
    lots of collors which dont fit the theme.

    like I said top > bottom =]


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    Very nice tags, though i much prefer your sprite tags of old XD


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    the 1st is good, nice environment and colors..

    2nd i like it as well, but some spots are a bit blurry (it seems to me)... overall it
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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    These are awesome tags,
    All of your tags are perfect ^_^
    Not one of your tags unsatisfied me. Nice Work.

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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    hehe tnx, wel nice to hear you like them so much then br0, but wel I am not that good to make perfect stuff yet, although I think I am increasing alot still... trying new stuff on a daily basis... thus should improve in skills... ;) and now gettin some help from a 'Real' inter plus rated GFXer... thus should be inter for real in no time, and when i say for real I mean on WM studio's one of the harshest rating gfx sites on the net... ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by +DI-Dachi View Post
    lol@ those comments... I do think they are better then my older works... you just cant see the skills I gues, ask Mibu what I mean... ;) and the placement is good, nothing wrong with it... I always tended to somewhat center the render/focal, and tryin to get away from that, cuzz people said stuff about that, and with that I mean inters and higher... they only said to change my light part and clean them up... and that compo could be a little less centered... but oh wel, gues its taste difference.... I dont know what is wrong with the light or anything, I dont think they have errors... xD wel this is a quote from the people on WM studio, that know a bit more about graphix, on what they said... ;)

    Top is great IMO =]

    bottom the lgihting is weird.
    lots of collors which dont fit the theme.

    like I said top > bottom =]

    Woah just woah...

    You are askin C&C and then you completly ignore it.

    you just cant see the skills I gues, ask Mibu what I mean... ;)
    No no no, I know FMK can see the skills basicly cause his sigs are better then yours.

    and the placement is good, nothing wrong with it
    Not true, the renders are placed way too much to the left which bring to much space on the right side.

    I dont know what is wrong with the light or anything, I dont think they have errors
    Then why are you askin C&C on the signatures?

    wel this is a quote from the people on WM studio, that know a bit more about graphix, on what they said
    I havent posted here in a while, but this just hurts. I've read the quotes, well you shouldn't have posted them since they did NOT said anything I couldn't have said. They are just basic +1 post counts. Your post annoys the shit out of me tbh.

    And nearer isnt a word..

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    Okay i got a bit of a issue here with your attitude, Dachi.
    You're a great graphic artist and all but your ego is over the top.
    You asked for comments and criticism and FMK gave it to you so take the advice, and continue to practice to get better.

    Your 'skills' are in one area of the graphic world. You have not done much of exploring other ideas and such.

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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    First signature - Placement of the render, green thingy on his left shoulder, right side of the signature needs more work.

    Second signature - his hand looks weird and I don't fancy it render also looks "over-taken" by the effects. His face and hair need work on to be done.

    When asking for C&C you gotta expect some people not liking your work, you shouldn't let that put you down or think people C&C-ing you think you got no skills. They're just trying to help you improve your signatures. Listen to them, like people listen to your comments too.

    Overall they do look good, but they're basically nothing against your previous ones.


    Also another tip, with an attitude like that on Ragezone you wont last long. I've been lurking around Portfolio section for a while now and I've came to notice that you're too egoistic. No matter the photoshop skills, you shouldn't act like that. Tidy up.

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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    Quote Originally Posted by Grasna View Post
    Okay i got a bit of a issue here with your attitude, Dachi.
    You're a great graphic artist and all but your ego is over the top.
    You asked for comments and criticism and FMK gave it to you so take the advice, and continue to practice to get better.

    Your 'skills' are in one area of the graphic world. You have not done much of exploring other ideas and such.
    Haha, exactly. Nothing, I mean nothing is perfect.

    These are awesome tags,
    All of your tags are perfect ^_^
    Not one of your tags unsatisfied me. Nice Work.
    Ah, although that contains no criticism you take it openly. It seems as if you only want to be complimented here. Honestly, if you think that there are some better places to give you critique, why post it here? Oh, that's right, because you asked for criticism, and we are providing.

    Both signatures are good, I'd prefer the first over the second. But, in the second one, I dislike the two soft brushes on the right, it distracts it from the focal.

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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    [QUOTE=+DI-Dachi;4718184]lol@ those comments... I do think they are better then my older works... you just cant see the skills I gues, ask Mibu what I mean... ;) and the placement is good, nothing wrong with it... I always tended to somewhat center the render/focal, and tryin to get away from that, cuzz people said stuff about that, and with that I mean inters and higher... they only said to change my light part and clean them up... and that compo could be a little less centered... but oh wel, gues its taste difference.... I dont know what is wrong with the light or anything, I dont think they have errors... xD wel this is a quote from the people on WM studio, that know a bit more about graphix, on what they said... ;)

    Top is great IMO =]

    bottom the lgihting is weird.
    lots of collors which dont fit the theme.

    like I said top > bottom =]


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    Very nice tags, though i much prefer your sprite tags of old XD


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    the 1st is good, nice environment and colors..

    2nd i like it as well, but some spots are a bit blurry (it seems to me)... overall it

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    Your effects are improving, but other then that... same ol` same ol`.

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    Nice blending and sexy light source.. Dachi never fails :x

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    Quote Originally Posted by blyddlyl View Post
    Nice blending and sexy light source.. Dachi never fails :x
    Honestly, you should stop kissing his ass.
    Sure he is good but hes not that great. People like you who FAWN over dachi make him think that hes the proest and gods gift to the graphic section.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grasna View Post
    Honestly, you should stop kissing his ass.
    Sure he is good but hes not that great. People like you who FAWN over dachi make him think that hes the proest and gods gift to the graphic section.
    Nope I don't think his the proest. Theres more people better than his.. His improving alot too. I do not kiss anyone ass ok?

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    Re: Perfection nearer I think - Dachi Stylin'

    This should be locked.

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