Phantasmagoria Signature

[RSRH]

So I made this a few weeks ago... Comments?

[MentaL]

[King Towel]

This may sound rude, but it is constructive.

Bad flow - Try using some c4d's, and making the signature have more of a contrast. There is no big focal point in the sig, so it makes it kind of hard to look at.

Text - The text is very big bulky, and doesnt fit well. Try making it smaller, with a more flow-ey font. Also try adding some neat effects to it perhaps using clipping masks or gradients.

All-In-All i suggest you look at some tutorials either in the tutorial section, or using google.

I hope my critisism helps. It isnt as bad as some of the first signatures that I made.