Rate.. :S

[NuTCracker]

Came out kinda funky :S:S dunno.. you descide

[MentaL]

[ElMarshal]

Lower the opacity on the white.

[CrownC]

lower the opacity of the whole sig..im not jokin its really bright , even though I got my monitor the darkest possible O.o

[gan_187]

maby erase the "myst"(white thing) in front of the render and lower the whole "myst's" oppacity and recenter the text its kinda offset but maby that was ur intention and maby change ther c4d render but thats like remaking the sig so modify what u think is best.

[.YourName]

its not so much bright as it is foggy, so like everyone else said, lower the opacity of the foggy stuff, also, that little white text box looks bad imo

[Mistyrious]

can't see anything o_O

[Avenged]

a little bright? i cant see shit

[ShadowLance]

6/10
I suggest that you put a lens flare on the upper-left corner, make those "rays of light" or something more realistic and do something with the render.